constructive criticism welcome... gosh I'm tired, so I understand if you're tired too and don't have much to say today. I started writing this story differently, but even I got bored, which obviously was a very bad sign. But I liked the little boy at the start so I made him a story for himself. This would be the second entry of mine presenting a different way of dealing with death, that's interesting. Sleepy time.
I like the way it rounded out in the end, with the grandmother and grandson both joined in a love of laughter. Gentle story, and a look at another culture. I too have been so tired lately!! must be all the build up to festive season.
Thank you, I'm glad the grandmother-grandson seemed to complete the story. My original idea didn't include that, and the story didn't really go anywhere but I had nothing else. Then the grandmother revealed herself and the story all seemed to come together. I love ... experiencing this writing thing, the process is so interesting.
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gosh I'm tired, so I understand if you're tired too and don't have much to say today.
I started writing this story differently, but even I got bored, which obviously was a very bad sign. But I liked the little boy at the start so I made him a story for himself.
This would be the second entry of mine presenting a different way of dealing with death, that's interesting.
Sleepy time.
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(I don't actually have a grandmother relationship myself, unfortunately. )
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