second thoughts about life

[standsalone1]

So much pain that drives me this way

Comments

meh

[dancechica_24]

i'm gonna be a tough critic........i liked some of your other poems better, sorry, but at least i'm honest, rather than all the other people who may say it's good but really they don't think so and they're only pittying you, but, yeah, it's good but i liked some of oyur other ones better.....don't like me opinion?.....DEAL WITH IT. :)

[standsalone1]

ha seriously i didnt like this poem that much either.. it was like hard to try and rhyme and do that thing.. and it just turned out liek crap.. oh well i spent time on it and i didnt feel like deleting it