Comments | stanleee: The Stars Are Blind; Luna-centric; Onew/Luna; PG

stanleee

The Stars Are Blind; Luna-centric; Onew/Luna; PG

May 07, 2011 14:56

The Stars Are Blind
Luna-centric; Onew/Luna; fluff; highschool!au; 1753 words
In which Luna thinks horoscope schmoroscope, it can’t deal with anything in life.

( But what confuses her more is the fact that the horoscope prediction she read this morning? Well for most part, it had rung true. )

rating: pg, ♥, pairing:onew/luna, !fanfic, *crossover, luna-centric, ):, au, member: luna, genre: fluff, member: onew

Comments 6

singthistunes May 7 2011, 10:14:26 UTC

This was so sweet and adorable.
I hardly read SHINee/F(x), but this makes me want to read more.
You wrote their characters very realistic, the whole story seemed real in so many ways.
And I love how you used the horoscope as the basics of the fic, it flowed extremely well.

thanks for writing! ♥

stanleee May 7 2011, 13:47:57 UTC

;-; thank you very much.
I thought this whole story was a bit lacking though it's awfully heartening to have your comment here ♥

bollywoodrecord May 7 2011, 18:28:09 UTC

It was AMAZING. I loved it. Amber's obsession with horoscopes is really cute, and convincing Luna... Haha, it was all wonderful. I was wondering how she was going to meet Onew, and at the coffee shop... What's with Onew and coffee shops? I've read so many of those. XD Anyways, it was wonderful, thank you for writing. :)

stanleee May 8 2011, 02:06:38 UTC

aww thank you bb!
lol idk either but I've always loved the atmosphere of cafes, it's just warm and inviting hahah ♥

tonirose0724 May 11 2011, 00:32:04 UTC

Awww.. I am really sad that you won't be updating this! I've read your other lunew fanfic 'Clueless' as well, and I want to add how great of a writer you are! Your tone in this fic was just amazing, it had like a suspenseful tone to it like at every word you were just anticipating for Luna to meet Onew anytime soon!

Anyways, I hope you do continue, if not, continue your Clueless fic!

stanleee May 13 2011, 11:41:07 UTC

thank you bb, that means a lot! ♥
I'm not a very good chaptered fic writer though, I think I might spoil what I've already written ):
but I guess I could try? haha idk really but thank you again :D