Why me???

[star4nsync]

I sent a host a part of my story that I wrote, and got a not so good message... she told me tips, but the story is SO LONG that I have to go back and fix EVERYTHING in it. I was putting PAST TENSE and PRESENT TENSE together when you're not suppose to, past is better for a story, so she won't post it up on her site until I fix it

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[brightbrowneyes]

Well, being an auther takes a lot, so don't worry about it. Fix the little mistakes and it'll be cool.

Dre
(ps- I got a LJ! Whee!)

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[anonymous]

Amber-
I think you're taking this whole thing of what she said out of context. She wasn't dissing on your work. She just wanted you to make it not so confusing with the past tense. She said that she was intrigued by the story so does that say it sucks?
Elan