[fic] part three

[star_chase]

title: The Fifth Trial
rating: PG
fandom: Super Junior
pairing: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
summary: The life of a Jedi is never a simple one and Zhou Mi, alongside his unruly, new apprentice, must learn how to handle all the situations this life can throw at them. Even the unexpected ones.

Comments

[jishu]

It's beautiful yet sad T_T I kinda wished that they just ran off happily ever after~ but they're really being a true Jedi and it just kinda frustrates me @_@ but I really love the fic so much it hurts >.<;;;

Though I wanted to hate Geng and Siwon~ I can't really do that since they're really good people and just trying to do what is good for QMi... sigh...

[star_chase]

A Jedi's true calling is to the Force, and the protection of other people, so they might not be able to have each other, but QMi can still have that! That's how I like to think of it as, anyway, it's a little less sad then XD

Thank you so much for reading! I'm sorry I made you sad :(

[thelovelight]

cleverlilwill rec'd me to this and I'm so glad she did. This was so completely and utterly amazing. (It's also 5 am, so I'm gonna try and write this fast XD)

I too haven't seen any of the movies (save one, but I didn't understand much + my high school world religions class touched on it) but this completely captured my attention from start to finish.

Not crying (yet) but ugh, my heart... the scene with Kui Xian opening his arms to freedom and Zhou Mi realizing they can't grasp it tore at me. And Geng and Siwon were the perfect touch.

>> okay, now I'm tearing up. Before I sob all over my lappie, once again, great job. I loved this. ♥

[star_chase]

Wow it's getting recced now?! That makes me absurdly happy!

I really hope that I did a decent job of explaining things throughout the fic, I'm well aware that I'm probably in the minority with my geekdom over these movies, so I hope nothing was too confusing for you! But I'm all kinds of excited that you still managed to read through this epic anyway! XD

I'm sorry to have made you tear up! But thank you so so much for reading this, you've made a simple geek very happy to know that this was enjoyed! ♥

[star_chase]

I never imagined I would write one either! I've had a secret desire to do so for ages, but I couldn't actually bring myself to write it until Tali insisted that I must! XD The QMi wasn't off-putting for you, was it? Because they're not even QMi for the first 25,000 words XD Ahhh you flatter me dhakdkaksd I'm so alkdlsdk that you, that ANYONE has even read this monster! So I am just going to happily die at your praise ♥♥ *~*
Ah well, I wouldn't say the newer versions suck, they have Obi-Wan! But I think Star Wars fanatics (like myself) prefer the original trilogy because, well, it's the first! And they are awesome! But I'm so obsessed that I can enjoy the new versions too XD But really, if you haven't seen the original trilogy with Luke and Vader and everyone then YOU MUST RENT THEM OUT. REALLY. HDLALDHJAKDS THEY ARE SO COOL. And well, I've been reading many many Star Wars books to see how it works written, if you count that as research XD And had the wookieepedia open at all times to check up details and things! I put a lot of work

[anonymous]

I saw the original Star Wars trilogy back when I was a kid and basically the only things I remember are R2-D2 and "Luke, I am your father." Which is to say that my knowledge of Star Wars is scant at best. You did a great job in making this really approachable for people like me. And all the thought and care you put into this is incredible. It just does something to me to see someone put so much heart into what they do, idek how to explain it. ♥

Oh, how the ending broke my heart. But I found the second-to-last part with Geng strangely comforting in a way? QMi. T_____T Somewhere in another time and place, they are together and happy and precious. Or something. :|

[star_chase]

I wish I knew who you were because this is a really awesome comment ;___; but thank you so much! I'm so glad that you could still enjoy it! Thank you! ♥ ;~;

[remixthesoul]

that.... was totally awesome *_______*

[taylormercury]

Ah thank you! I'm so glad you think so! Star Wars is awesome, QMi is awesome, I'm glad my combination of both was too XD Thank you for reading!! :D