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star_chase

[fic] part two

Oct 27, 2010 13:48

Title: Burning a Path Between the Stars
Fandom and OT3: Super Junior; Shiwon/Eunhyuk/Donghae
Rating: PG
Word Count: 18,466
Summary: The three man (and one robot) crew of the spaceship Sapphire favour adventure and exploration above all things - unless there's some money to be made in the process. So when an ancient myth falls into their hands the ( Read more... )

fic, fandom: super junior, type: au, pairing: hyukjae/shiwon/donghae

Comments 27

catskilt October 27 2010, 16:57:58 UTC

THIS WAS COMPLETELY AMAZINGLY AMAZING TO READ AND I WILL COME BACK FOR A PROPER COMMENT. JUST KNOW THAT FOR NOW I AM IN AWE.

/hands you the universe

star_chase October 29 2010, 12:42:02 UTC

/takes it from you carefully

THANK YOU SO MUCH. I am in awe from this lovely comment!! Thank you for reading!! ♥

oh god i am insane [1/2] catskilt October 30 2010, 08:12:01 UTC

I AM BACK TO TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS. I hope you don't mind really long-ass comments because I just have to write one to show you how amazing this entire fic is :DDD

I loved your characterisations of the guys, and the roles you gave them; Captain Donghae who's only useful sometimes and redundant in other times, when he starts getting bored and micro-managing everything. That was so completely hilarious like idek. Nerdy navigator Hyukjae with his flashes of genius, oh god, the idea of nerdy Hyukjae never really occurred to me before but you made it so him, I can totally picture it now. Siwon the cool pilot who gets all the female aliens' attention and who gets -_- sometimes but follows along anyway for the ride. And Kibum! I don't even know where to begin! The robot without-a-personality! Laughing forever ( ... )

Re: oh god i am insane [2/2] catskilt October 30 2010, 08:12:32 UTC

Again, the part where Donghae wants to trick Heechul, I was on the edge of my seat. idek how you managed to write it so suspensefully without actually blatantly making it suspenseful but LOL THEY DID IT AND IT WAS SUCH A GOOD RIDE AND THEY CAN HAS LOTS OF MONEY NOW! :DDDDD

Donghae looked a little sheepish, when they both looked at him. "Ah, well. I might have run into the real mechanic, when I was leaving the ship."
Except that Donghae can be such a failface too. Lolol /pats him

I like the part where they talked it out about the importance of the treasure versus adventure too. It's been done before but it didn't feel contrived or anything, and I think you did it really, really well. :D

"Oh." Kibum never hung out with him, Donghae thought. Traitor.
LOL KIBUM THE TRAITOROUS ROBOT.

"Is that it?" Henry sounded less than impressed. "I thought there were supposed to be gems. From all the stories of this guy, you made it sound like there was a fortune waiting here for us."
Bahaha, Henry's so-what attitude to the whole thing <3

( ... )

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lovescone October 27 2010, 22:00:56 UTC

OMG sobbing!!! i have to leave for work so the best comment i can give is that i may just be late because i legit could not leave this halfway finished slkdfjslkdfjs T____T ♥♥

star_chase October 29 2010, 12:42:38 UTC

I HOPE YOU DID NOT GET INTO TROUBLE ;__; that is indeed a precious comment, thank you so much for reading!! ♥

mearii87 October 28 2010, 00:43:34 UTC

SPAAAAAAACE. THIS WAS AWESOME. OMG. ♥♥♥♥♥♥ I just -- the dynamics and adorableness and Heechul. I got all excited whenever Heechul showed up. ♥♥♥ So lovely :) :)

star_chase October 29 2010, 12:44:37 UTC

I couldn't resist adding Heechul the pirate, he wants to work his way into every fic, I swear XD Thank you so much for reading! This took a long time to write, so I'm really appreciative that you read it and enjoyed it! I know it came out long ;; Thank you! ♥

starlitbright October 29 2010, 11:47:23 UTC

the universe you made was amazing and how well you fit everything together. i remember reading a bit of it on kpfm, and i am so happy to see it completed for troisbang! my favourite was henry and his nonchalance on being whisked away and stuck on a ship full of pirates, hahaha.

great fic ♥

star_chase October 29 2010, 12:45:32 UTC

hfksdkks oh my goodness you do not know how happy your comment has made me! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! It took a long time, but I'm glad I finally finished it! ♥

nautisch October 29 2010, 20:12:13 UTC

THIS IS SO ADORABLE I CAN'T EVEN.

the entire time I was reading it I was trying to decide who my favorite character was, and I just couldn't. donghae the useless ambitious captain, henry who isn't even fazed by being captured by a bunch of idiots, mischievous pirate heechul, and jfc ROBOT WITH AN ATTITUDE!KIBUM. the interactions between all of these characters were just so great and funny, and it was clear that you put a lot of effort into making this universe. this was really a pleasure to read, smooth and entertaining.

Kibum, in his robotic monotone, answered, "I cannot cook poorly, only to within my programs standards. And as I am not designed to be a kitchen-bot my standards for cooking are low."
I just love his passive aggressive comments at donghae throughout this whole fic. cries.

star_chase November 9 2010, 00:41:21 UTC

Thank you so much! You have no idea how happy your comment makes me, and I'm sorry that I couldn't reply to it sooner! But just know that I appreciate it very much, and I'm so incredibly pleased that you enjoyed this! It was such a blast to write, so it's good to know that people enjoyed reading it! Thank you so much ♥