[fic] part two

[star_chase]

Title: Walk All Over You
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: SHINee
Pairing: Onew/Minho
Wordcount: 15,855
Summary: The thing Jinki does best: embarrass himself. This is that story.

part one

Comments

[shinyshawol]

wow, this is just amazing! i really like how jinki went to the bar on his own on a ladies night! and minho's interactions and jinki's are soooooo adorable!

<3

[star_chase]

thank you so much!! onho just write themselves really I swear, they're so fun and perfect and adorable ;; thank you so much for reading and commenting!! ♥

[amoleggere]

this is so cute but where's the sex ;; i had to pause from time to time bc i can't handle the cute and the perfection that is cute clumsy onew and suave minho but where's the sex . i hope you write more shinee and onho but with the sex ♥♥♥

[star_chase]

I SEE YOUR SUBTLE HINTS!!! I am sorry but I haven't written porn in years I don't think I remember how so that might never happen but really, I am sure your imagination can fill in the gaps better than my own writing could ;; but omg, thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm really glad you liked it, onho are so adorable I swear ;; ♥ and I am sorry for the lack of actual sex orz

[viena_soma]

>_____<

this is so cute.. so adorable... so fucking sweat...

Hahahahaha... Kibum.. he absolutely bully Jinki.. poor him....

i love how they are meet... i mean onho...the frist time. second and finally dating.. XD..
hihihihihi..

this is my fav.... ^^..

i love your writing skill... >___<....

i will wait another your fanfic... XD

[star_chase]

haha yes, Kibum is a bit mean but I quite enjoy the somewhat friendship they have going! (and I like to imagine, in scenes I have not written, Jinki can give back almost as good as he gets? maybe XD)

aww thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed this, because I was so nervous! I hope it won't disappoint if I do end up writing more in future! (I am a slow writer ;;) thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥

[chansai_unmyong]

oh my, oh my... nice one long fic you got there~ even though jinki's soooooo clumsy, minho still fell for him... and what's nicer than those mushy encounters? one hot teasing moments of the two~! ^_________^

[star_chase]

haha I know right, but I think jinki's clumsy/awkward nature is totally endearing, and I'm sure minho would too! it's too cute watching him be ridiculous and embarrass himself XD thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it, I was so nervous! Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[chansai_unmyong]

yes, jinki being the klutz and all... but at least minho dont mind~ :3

hope you get to right more onho in the future... ^^ *dreamy eyes, wishies for a sequel* XD

[star_chase]

oh god how could minho mind? it's so cute and endearing ;; (and he always seems to be smiling at onew during rl onho interactions, so cute ;; )

thank you, I will definitely write more if I have the ideas for them! they're my otp, I want to shower them in love and fics ;;

[keyit_because]

This was amazing! It's cute, and funny and... let me just lovr this Onew <3 He's so sweet ^^

Yoh did a great job on this one :3 I certainly wouldn't say no to more stories from you, if you know what I mean ;3

No, but seriously. Thank you for writing this ^^ I'll be sure to recommend it to people :D
Have a wonderful week~ ('cause a day is just not enough 'ㅂ'*)

[keyit_because]

(so many spelling errors... I'm sorry ^^' on my phone and I didn't read it before I posted it. Well, that's life ;3)