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Title: Must Be Magic
Fandom: SHINee
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Rating: G
Word Count: 9,083
Notes: Much thanks to everyone who listened to me lose my mind over this and help out, I ♥ you all.
This was my fic entry for shineeshorts!
(Does the table formatting make it easier for people to read this? just wondering!)

Comments

[hipployta]

Cute...Jinki freaking out and Taemin following the object of his desire down the rabbit hole lol

[star_chase]

haha yes, exactly as I like to imagine my ontae! thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥

[koukaiaru]

Omg.

So I normally don't really read Ontae but when I saw it was by you I just had to give it a chance and I'm so glad I did because it was wonderful ;;.
Ahhh, where to start. Magic *__*. I really love the AU you created here, it's so hooking and original. The way Taemin was so casual about it at first, that he just came into the shop and tried so hard to look cool, as if everything he saw was completely normal. The book he bought, lmao xD. The doorbell was such a nice touch too, how did you even come up with it *__*. Jinki feeding it cheese was the cutest thing ever ;;.

The progression of their relationship was so natural too. I loved how openly enamoured Taemin was and that Jinki saw it and that it affected him, and just ugh everything. The cake. That was so Taemin omg. I can't believe he added mayonnaise. And they were both so in character, it was such a nice read. Really, there's not a thing I didn't like about it. Perfect. Perfeeeect.

I think I need to add an Ontae section to my reclist dfjhbefjhbvkhefbvkjnevf.

<3

[star_chase]

ahhh your comment is amazing and you've made me so happy you have no idea, I can't properly express how lovely your comment is djajfjakdjaks I'm so glad then, since you don't usually read ontae, that you enjoyed this! That means a lot, wow ;~; and I'm so relieved you thought they were in character! As my first attempt at ontae I was really scared about getting how I see their relationship right, and getting Taemin right ;~;

ahhhh honestly I don't know what else to say! I love all the things you picked out in your comment because they were all things I really wanted people to see (Taemin trying to be cool, Taemin's obvious adoration, a natural progression to their relationship ;;) ahh, just, thank you so, so much, I'm so happy you've no idea ;; ♥♥

[shinyshawol]

awwww, this is just so adorable!

[star_chase]

aww thank you so much for reading! I'm so glad you thought so :D ♥

[kpopforlife]

This is so unbearable cute. I remember reading it when you posted for the shinee shorts but idk if I commented so I shall do it again. It is so cute it hurts okay. I love everything about this. Awkward ontae ftw! The disgruntled doorbell is my favorite.

[star_chase]

awww I swear the older I get the more I just want everything to be lovely and cute and perfect, so I'm glad that you liked the niceness of this fic! thank you so much for reading and commenting, really! ;; ♥ (lmao everyone seems to love doorbell, I wish I had one now ;;)

[fonulyn]

I came here because a friend suggested this for cheering up, and I have to say I was not disappointed :D It's absolutely adorable, and I love the atmosphere in the shop, and this left a warm and fuzzy feeling all in all. Really lovely~♥

[star_chase]

Aw you have no idea how happy a comment from you makes me!! I'm so surprised and pleased, and I'm just surprised you were recced this! I'm really glad it cheered you up then, a warm, happy feeling was exactly what I wanted to give off with this fic (as that is how ontae make me feel ;;) so I'm really glad! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥♥