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(fic: SPN) The Animal (2/3 + Epilogue)

Jul 17, 2008 06:54

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nsnfan September 29 2008, 02:45:22 UTC

This is another great chapter. I was so glad to see Sam arrive at the bar. Now that they are together all will work out fine.

I really liked the details when Dean notices how Sam has curled up into himself and is small in the bed, how reaches out to hold his hand, love how Sam communicates with Dean. I am wondering if the pack or a part of the pack (pups) is with him? Who is he talking to? Who he seems to be making place for in the bed? I am just so intrigued.

I loved the description of Dean's travel through Sam's mind. It is all so intricate.

When he woke up, Sam replied in a whole sentence!!! I am so thrilled about it.

Thanks for writing this and sharing.

star_dancer54 September 30 2008, 21:00:38 UTC

They still have a lot of work to do between them, but yes, it's always better when Sam and Dean are together, or at least on speaking terms :)

The idea of the intricacies of Sam's mind is something that I've been wanting to write for some time now, and I'm really glad that it was so well-thought of in this story.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

mangacat201 July 3 2009, 19:11:10 UTC

Wow... Orpheus goes to the underworld to fetch Eurydike, eh? Sam did a careful batch of work there, wow... that was eerie and challenging and totally gripping!
Cat

star_dancer54 August 8 2009, 23:44:44 UTC

lol Something like that, though it's definitely a hell of his own creation. That's actually one of my favorite parts of the story, honestly.

Thank you for commenting and reading!