RAIN

[star_drop8]

Title: 'Rain'
Author: star_drop8
Length: 4chappies
Character(s): Dbsk
Pairing(s): Jaeho
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: angst, tragedy, mind!picker
Summary: Jaejoong had let go of his for for Yunho; he had let Yunho go, without knowing that Yunho was going to propose to him that day. Ever since, Jaejoong has been in nothing, but a gloomy state. And so has the weather. It has

Comments

[asuka2507]

nice^^

[kpopangel]

was jae seeing things? or what others said could be true.. that yunho is dead.. noooo.. pls noo.. i hope it was just jae's hallucination cos he missed yunho or because of guilt.. on a second thought, perhaps yun really died cos otherwise how could he chat online with jae and the next minute, they're bumping into each other outside.. (i'm just assuming that 'Drenched Heart' was yunho)

if jae had given him chance and yunho told him he was gonna propose, things wouldn't turn this way... but then, you won't have a story =P

i love your poetic descriptions of rain, nature, and all. yes, it's pretty intense but it's beautiful.. do continue =) i'll go read chapter 2 now...