so...yunho's dead. right? to be really frank, if everyone died xept jae, then wat's the point of him even living? he might as well died along with everyone else (never thought i said that in such an insensitive wayXD. It's ok, i'll die with you joongie ^_^)
er...whoa...i think this is the first dark jaeho fic I hv ever read not incl. those on social issues and some supernatural but nothing like this ^^;;
It all happened very fast that you could only comprehend the flow and absorb the plot..if you elaborate a lil bit more on the devil (or whatever it is) or put in more descriptions I think it would make the story stronger~
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i'm confused~*pouts*
yun saved joongie from a-
what?demon?
and then..he too..died?
everyone died except..jae?
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so...yunho's dead. right?
to be really frank, if everyone died xept jae, then wat's the point of him even living? he might as well died along with everyone else (never thought i said that in such an insensitive wayXD. It's ok, i'll die with you joongie ^_^)
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It all happened very fast that you could only comprehend the flow and absorb the plot..if you elaborate a lil bit more on the devil (or whatever it is) or put in more descriptions I think it would make the story stronger~
Overall I like it quite well ;)
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