(Un-)perfect

Mar 09, 2010 19:50

Title: (Un-)perfect
Pairing: Shibutani Subaru x Yasuda Shota
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Fluff 
Wordcount: 6795
Disclaimer: (here)
Synopsis: In which Subaru is an ambitous musician who fails to write music. And Yassu is a coffee-shop boy who had been dumped by his girlfriend. And sometimes perfection is not everything you need.
Warnings: Kitchy ( Read more... )

c: subaru, c: yassu, p: yasuba, f: kanjani8

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cierra_james March 10 2010, 09:31:42 UTC
I dunno, something about this fic is so completely perfect.
I feel all fuzzy and warm inside now.

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arifuretakotoba March 10 2010, 17:30:15 UTC
I'm really happy you think it's perfect (yay for random conection to the whole topic). And I'm glad it made you feel fuzzy, the story was intended to acchieve this feeling :3
Thank you for reading.

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arifuretakotoba March 10 2010, 17:45:13 UTC
Ah, thank you so much for reading it.
What a long comment, really, it made me smile.

Don't melt, melting would prevent you from reading other stories D:

Originally, I did not intend to add any phrase from one here, but it somehow did turn out to fit well.
*hands you a tissue* I'm sorry I made you cry.

I planned this to have ~4000 words but somehow those boys started to create dynamics I couldn't keep short. Those sentences in brakets did not want to stop coming to my mind.
I'm glad you read it although it had been that long.

I think I'll try to write some more about those two, they are kind of a muse to me for there was quite a time my creativity was like zero.
There are already a few ideas I want to write down - once school starts to stop eating my brain.

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kiyo_shi March 10 2010, 15:44:22 UTC
OMG!!!

i love this!

it's so... so... touching...
;o;
i can't describe it...

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arifuretakotoba March 10 2010, 17:32:28 UTC
Thanks for reading <3
It maked me happy to see that some people think of it as touching, I hoped to write something like that.

And you don't need to describe it, I think I have a very good idea what you mean =3

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epunx99 March 11 2010, 07:06:33 UTC
WOOHOO!!!the Subassan /yasuba fic drought has finally ended!!!!

thank you for this!!! this made my 30 minute break from work worth-it...
it's just like watching a mini-drama...ahahaha.. i like it a lot...
ur Subaru is awesomely quirky... you even included PAAAAN!Maru & shexy-ass Ohkura... and Yasu's skirts were a nice touch too... <3 teehee...

hope you'll write MOAR SUBASSAN fics soon...

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arifuretakotoba March 11 2010, 18:52:33 UTC
Ah, I'm really happy you enjoyed the story <3
Mini-Dramas had always been my favourite, guess it somehow shows with this fic *tries to hide the big red blush on her face*
..and I somehow had to include PAAAAN!Maru when writing a story with SubaruBAND in it =D

with all those nice comments, I feel like I HAVE to write more, so I hope I can support ending the fic drought /:

Either way, thank you for your comment.

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ceylon_miko March 12 2010, 05:10:21 UTC
wah this is sooo good! This was cute. The relationship between Subassan is just so refreshing and comfortable.

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arifuretakotoba March 12 2010, 12:05:06 UTC
I'm glad you liked it :3
Refreshing and comfortable is how I wanted to portray them in here, so it makes me happy to hear I'm not the only one thinking so.
Thank you so much your comment.

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