Coin Laundry

[star_strewn]

Title: Coin Laundry
Pairing: Shibutani Subaru x Yasuda Shota
Rating: NC-17 - R
Genre: AU, Lemon
Wordcount: 6440
Disclaimer: (here)
Synopsis: When he has to use the coin laundry due to his lack of a washing machine, Shibutani Subaru is not amused. But he meets a guy and... well, thing change.
Warnings: Okay, maybe, maybe this is pwp, because the whole

Comments

[arifuretakotoba]

I'm really happy you liked it <3
Nah, don't melt D: it leaves puddles!

and thank you for reading & commenting

[arifuretakotoba]

AHHHH
yes, my new fic <3

[arifuretakotoba]

I see no problem there at all. I love you for your comment nevertheless <3

thank you so much.

And I really wanted to try the 2nd person pov here because.. I started with 3rd person, but it didn't feel right and first person was too much o the other hand D: so well, I found a liking in 2nd person pov.

[gekkouw]

I should run to bed, instead of reading this? But it's only 2:20AM 8DD I'm not sleepy at all, and Bouken is starting in 10 minutes! xO
and and and and...
I SOO LOVED EVERY WORD OF THIS STORY, really <333333
The amazing feeling of longing, and Yasu being all... seme and pervy at first XD And Subaru is so shy that it's already tooo cute for my brain 8DD But anyway, they ended up with Subaru topping Yasu, so his wish was granted...

I'm wondering where did Yasu's gf go tho..... but I bet Subaru was prettier than the girl, so Yasu choose him.

Oh, okay, I can't say anyting else but THANK YOOOUUUU it was so cute and prefect!!!!! >3<

[arifuretakotoba]

...and I've long been to bed when you posted that comment |D

but THANK YOU SO MUCH for your nice comment <3

uhm, the correct part in the story was his girlfriend - a really charming guitar-lady named Shoko-chan ,because I think Yasu is technically married to his guitar >: but I guess it wasn't to clear that I meant a guitar and not a girl. even my beta-reader asked what happened to yasu's gf |'D

*goes of to melt because of the heat & you saying it was perfect*

[gekkouw]

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAH, the guitar, really?
I bet you won't believe this, but when I first read that line, I thought, "Maybe it's just his guitar, lol, no, jk."
I REALLY DID.
Because.. if it really were a girl, Subaru would have reacted more to the fact, his beloved guy has a girlfriend.

[arifuretakotoba]

of course it's the guitar!! XD
you should listen to your first thoughts more, turns out they are quite right >D
well, I don't think a girlfriend would have fit into the whole concept of the story, but of course, Subaru would have had lots of sleepless nights because of the gf D:

and hell, YAY for appropriate icon <33
... yasu x his guitar should become my new otp.

[elyndys]

I really enjoyed this! Had a lovely warm feeling to it, the way you built up the feelings between them to a really hot climax! ^_~ I loved following Subaru's thoughts through it, and the ending was really sweet. ♥ Thanks for sharing!

[arifuretakotoba]

I'm very, very happy you liked it and thanks a lot for reading & commenting &hearts <3

[boneshatter]

I think... you exploded my heart lol

Ahhh, it's such a nice story <3 Good job :)

[arifuretakotoba]

oh noes |o| *tries to patch your heart*

it makes me happy that you liked the story, so thanks a lot for your lovely comment <3