Rain

[star_strewn]

Title: Rain
Pairing/Characters: Shibutani Subaru x Yasuda Shota
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Enormous use of imagery, especially when it comes to weather
Notes: My entry for the k8_exchange , written for lonelyxlovers . AU, because I thought the heart meant she would like to read it. It’s nothing special, but I really wanted to write this story, because it was the first idea that

Comments

[arifuretakotoba]

thanks for the compliments, I'm very happy that you liked the story.

I don't know whether I should write a sequel. It would be something completely different from this piece. but maybe a plot-bunny decides to hit me so I simply can't refuse to write a sequel.

I thought the appearance of the other members seemed rather forced, so I'm glad you likes it :D

[chocbiggestfan1]

oh wow. this absolutely beautiful.
Instead of being boring, the use of descriptions made the whole fic more poetic and stuffs.
I mean, I love the way yo relate the weather to Subaru's life.

After the black clouds had gone, shoved away by a pink umbrella, there was no happy sunshine and cloudless blue skies in his life, but a greyish mess of standing between starting anew and leaving something old behind.
-> love love love this line.

He was astonished about how fast the other clerk was in arriving on time to hit Yoko after he made some snarky remark
-> LOL. it's nice that you also inserted eito light-hearted moments.

thanks for sharing ^__^

[arifuretakotoba]

thank you a LOT for reading and leaving that lovely comment <3
it even had quotes <3
I'm really happy you enjoyed it, since I thought it was a bit dangerous to use so much imagery.

[arifuretakotoba]

thank you so much, dear <3
I'm happy you love it. But I'm not quite sure whether I'll write a sequel or not >: I let the plot-bunny decide =D
<3