"I fail at being gay"

Sep 04, 2010 21:41

„I fail at being gay.“

The blond poured down what seemed to be his sixth drink, struggling to put the glass back on the table without missing the coaster.

When Subaru had suggested to spend the night partying and ‘getting drunk until we won’t be able to walk anymore’, Yasuda had thought of it as a good opportunity to keep those woeful ( Read more... )

f: kanjani, c: subaru, c: yassu, p: yasuba

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gekkouw September 4 2010, 20:29:45 UTC
kiss-able Shota neck for Kazuuuuu~
This was so sweeet... Or I don't know, I haven't read a fic with this theme, I guess? But I reallyl liked this, too.
I'm sure Kazu likes it too<3
And I like you and Kazu too!

Danke schöööööön~

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kazukiayuuma September 4 2010, 22:44:17 UTC
asdsjfhdgkajsgfkahsjhd
KISS-ABLE SHOTA'S NECK!!! ♥♥♥
*melting*

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arifuretakotoba September 5 2010, 11:58:04 UTC
I simply couldn't keep that neck out of a story I would write for you .A.~ Kazu and Shota's neck belong together like blue and red bracelets do >w

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arifuretakotoba September 5 2010, 11:42:47 UTC
haha, you've spotted the neck-reference, hu? XD I simply had to squeeze it in somewhere :3
hm, what do you mean by "with this theme"? o: But I'm really happy you liked it, as I said, your comment made me squee at some ungodly hour and I had my neighbours complaining to me, but.. pfft =D
love you too <3

Bitte schön =''D

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kazukiayuuma September 4 2010, 22:42:40 UTC
Gosh!!
Shota, you're not the only one who had butterflies!!! ♥♥♥

Cleo, this is so sweet and the way Subaru aroused by hearing Shota's story made me "ASKHKLDHFJDHGKL"
Subaru, you do love him too hard!!!! ♥♥♥

Thank you Cleo!!!
You're AWESOME!!! ♥

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arifuretakotoba September 5 2010, 11:45:10 UTC
Yay for random butterflies. Butterflies are awesome *A*

naww, 'sweet' sounds as if you enjoyed the fic. like. very very much =D
*nods nods* well, subaru wouldn't be subaru if he didn't!

You're welcome. it's your birthday, dear =D And I try my best to be awesome, thank you XDD ♥~

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arifuretakotoba September 5 2010, 11:48:21 UTC
nawww, I'm happy you liked it <33~
you're not the only one to point out that is was unusual o: But I think and think and think and rethink and can't find why it should be /: care to assist? ><

Ah, yes ._.~ As stated in my personal journl, my life is quite a mess right now. It changes around every week and I need some routine and time to write something, so it does take quite long these days until I finish something, I'm afraid.
But university will start in october which finally gives my life some routine again. So this is when I want to start writing down all the ideas that are currently going through my head. those are quite a lot :3

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lakuru_san September 5 2010, 03:37:22 UTC
OMG. ONE WORD. AWESOME!

I swear I don't a thing over NC-17 fics for my boys but when it comes to yasuba I can read and appreciate well written unbeta-ed fics XD

Bonus points on Subaru being all sweet and ahem jealous! why his jealously makes me happy?! XD

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arifuretakotoba September 5 2010, 11:54:34 UTC
whohooo, thanks a lot for your lovely comment <33 "Awesome"? *A*

NC-17 fics are quite something.. well, they can be very very good sometimes, but I've read quite a lot where the whole thing was .. too forced and.. I don't know /: not really something you want to read again and again and again and...
so it makes me really really happy to read that you enjoyed this one, even if it was unbeta-ed D: I'll try to bribe my beta-reader to correct in as fast as possible. good thing she has a weak spot for cookies =D

yay <3 jealous Subaru is amazingly cute and possessive >D

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lakuru_san September 5 2010, 12:48:03 UTC
yes! AWESOME! XD Lemme repeat it AWESOME!

Ah NC-17 can either make me go "ewwwww!~" or "awwwwwww~ sweet" and this can be classified on the later. XD It just gave me butteflies on my stomach like Kazu~ has on hers. ROFL.

And other thing... I like your last paragraph... a lot.

For you.

Was the bomb... simple yet it conveys a lot. My yasuba love created fireworks. XD

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arifuretakotoba September 5 2010, 20:31:24 UTC
((\\°A°//)) whohoo, awesome <3

Exactly what I think and I'm afraid I'm always walking on the edge between those two /:
butterflies are always a good sign. everyone should have some *hands out butterflies*

>_< thank you so much, you don't know how flattered I feel. I wanted to convey a lot with that last pararaph and I'm always SO excited to get positive feedback on those paragraphs I like/ I wanted to be meaningful/etc.
colourful fireworks? *A*

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arifuretakotoba September 14 2010, 18:30:02 UTC
thank you soo much for the (belated? oO) wonderful comment <3

omg, you just invented the term "kirakira porn" and I love it to bits *A* Now I have an own termn for my style of writing. ilu <3

I really liked the ending and I'm happy I managed to convey what I wanted to convey **

thanks again for reading & commenting <3

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