Of firsts and seconds

Oct 05, 2010 23:02

When the first thing he heard that morning was the annoying sound of a cupboard landing on the floor, Shibutani Subaru thought about just turning in bed and going back to sleep. His headache and the clear absence of any need to leave the bed today, be it for work or a hungry fridge, were very much the same opinion.
On the other hand, his ears ( Read more... )

c: subaru, p: yasuba, f: kanjani8, c: yasu

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elyndys October 5 2010, 23:38:00 UTC
Aww I'm really happy it's Viki's birthday cos we all get fics to enjoy! ;D This was such a sweet story, loved the way you wrote Subaru's thoughts and growing feelings, and the way you built up their relationship was so lovely! I thought the pace was perfect, and the way you wrote their dialogue was just right, and the ending was so sweet! I love domestic stories like this! Thank you so much for sharing! :]

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arifuretakotoba October 6 2010, 18:32:47 UTC
ah, yes, good thing birthdays exist :D
thanks a lot for your lovely comment. I had some doubts about the pace, but reading this makes me less worried :3

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anippan October 6 2010, 11:50:47 UTC
I don't have time for a long comment, but this was lovely! I LOVE your AUs! <3333

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arifuretakotoba October 6 2010, 18:37:16 UTC
I'm really really happy about your comment, regardless of its lenght :3
I love to write AUs so I'm glad you love them *_*

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gekkouw October 6 2010, 15:39:36 UTC
YAAAAAAA FINALLY READ IT <3333333333
BEST PRESENT EVAAH. <3 thank you so much, loving this so hard T_____T

Let the quotes talk about themselves orz

He should get married to coffee. Really.
THIS 8DDDDD

“Well, I thought it would like to see the rest of the flat, too. But I think you’re right, it’s already seen enough, the other blankets will get jealous.”
AAAHH IT'S SO SUBARU-ISH I CAN SEE HIM SAYING THINGS LIKE THIS <3 so cute~

It’s the small things that matter to him.
Subaru Subaru Subaru why so Subaru <3

Up and down. What part of ‘up and down’ didn’t you get?”
8DDDDDDD I guess Yasu showed him well what that means, lolz.

I love this fic *_____* it made me go awww cute, I laughed a lot and then went WOWWW. So yeah. *-*
thank you again <33333333333

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arifuretakotoba October 6 2010, 18:44:50 UTC
YAY XD I hope you didn't spend your whole school day thinking about the ff X'D
nawwww but reading your awesome comment makes me happy <3 :3

I EVEN GOT SOME QUOTES *A*
<3 You deserve such a fic, because you're always so nice to leave awesome comments <333

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arifuretakotoba October 6 2010, 18:55:42 UTC
>//< thank you for your lovely comment, thank you thank you thank you <3

I'm happy you like the story. I thought it was a bit too long, though. I simply can't seem to keep short on words D:

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arifuretakotoba October 7 2010, 20:43:36 UTC
thanks a million for your comment. I'm happy it made your night ♥

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