our house made of paper [part ii]

[star_strewn]

Maru may be the first to notice that there’s something wrong, but Yoko just shrugs it off when Maru and Yasu approach him at work, asking if anything was wrong and if he wanted to get drunk that evening.
Ryo may be the first person to notice that he loses weight, because at some point all the fatty-jokes stopped.
Ohkura may be the first to notice

Comments

[yue_akuma]

This beautiful! Really! But omg... WHY SO SAD? ;______;

[arifuretakotoba]

I'm sorry ;_; it did cost me lots of nerves to let it end like this and I feel so sorry for Yoko, but I think this belongs to the whole "growing up"/"coming of age"-stuff ._.~

but thank you for the comment <3 Next time I'll try to something more cheerful!

[arifuretakotoba]

*tries to squeeze a "write" between to & something*

[bratnudel]

awww, so... so SAD T_T
thanks for sharing ;_;

[arifuretakotoba]

thank you very much for your comment <3
I'm sorry it had to end in such a sad way D: *hands you a tissue* <3

[chocbiggestfan1]

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this is beautiful and so sad.
poor yoko...

but I do love the ending ♥
...and leaves the apartment for good. this part killed me.

thank you for sharing :)

[arifuretakotoba]

I have to thank you for leaving such a lovely comment. I even got a quote ♥

I'm sorry it had to end in a sad way, but I'm happy you still liked it :3

[prisps]

I thought it was really cute at first and then I started to cry T______________T

I loved the ending, so sad! I loved everything, and so so sad ...

Thanks for sharing <3

[arifuretakotoba]

I didn't want to make you cry ;___; *hands you some tissues*

thanks for your comment ♥

[prisps]

hehe I love these "never going to work" love stories ~

[epicwaters]

D:
:'<

I enjoyed reading your story! I liked how real events were incorporated into the storyline. I feel bad for Yoko, especially at the end when he finally decides to walk away.

Thank you for sharing :}

[arifuretakotoba]

Thanks for the comment :)
I really wanted to use some real events, especially when they are so inviting to include them :D that recomen episode is classic XD

♥