Comments | star_xd_knights: FIC: "Batskin" (3/6)

mistressmarilyn in star_xd_knights

FIC: "Batskin" (3/6)

Sep 08, 2008 15:34

TITLE: "Batskin" (3/6 ( Read more... )

Comments 10

charliemc September 9 2008, 01:33:40 UTC

I love this series! I love the way you write Harvey -- so totally real to me. This is a very HOT chapter, by the way. (heh)

Your writing -- as always -- blows me away.

I'm impressed by all the research you've done -- and how close to canon you've made this. Go, you!

The scene with Harvey and Rachel on the sofa is excellent -- so REAL. And I LOVE the encounter between Harvey and The Batman. (Sexy stuff!)

I'm excited for the next chapter!

mistressmarilyn September 9 2008, 04:37:17 UTC

Thank you muchly! And thanks for your help as a beta, not to mention the icon and fabulous banner. I LOVE IT!

I loved the scene with Harvey/Rachel. And I was surprised with the Dark Knight made his first appearance. I love fanfic and it's many surprises!

Kuddos to the Artist. rekindle956 September 10 2008, 06:43:45 UTC

Didn't realized it was you. Great banner, seems the real thing. Thank you.

rekindle956 September 9 2008, 06:28:00 UTC

This is a story. The things about the campaign. Bruce=JFKjr, why haven't i thought of it before? Rachel, i don't dislike her here. "...I came when I saw you walk out of Rossi's Deli..." yes, Mr.EckhartMr. Dent has that quality about him. For me, it was when he held out his hands to be handkuffed(?) *cough-cough*

Everything about Harvey, I can hear him. His back story, making him, him. The special guest starsthe handjob, *faints*

Skin Game deserves some more attention, yes? for the future, for a one-shot?

Thank you so much!

mistressmarilyn September 10 2008, 03:26:59 UTC

Thank you for all your comments. I love your enjoyment of the story. My favorite line in this part is the one from Rachel you quoted above. And the JFK, Jr. thing came to me suddenly from somewhere.

I don't know where those guys in the club came from! They were *all* unexpected visitors. But I love how a story seems to write itself, regardless of how carefully you plot it out.

(which is why I'm a bit stressed about this one ...)

rekindle956 September 10 2008, 06:45:22 UTC

(hey, you can pull it off...)

:D

Hotter! victorianjac September 10 2008, 08:22:51 UTC

This is getting hotter & hotter! What kinky scenes in that club and What a way to introduce the Dark Knight - awesome, heh heh! Kinky Bruce! This fic should get an award! Can't wait for the next part, I'm very giddy with the way you are writing it - thank you!!

Re: Hotter! mistressmarilyn September 11 2008, 04:08:06 UTC

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, because it was like pulling out every tooth in my head to get it done.

This fic should get an award! (Hehe, I never even get nominated for awards!)

I just hope the next three chapters live up to to the outline I have. It's always a little stressful at this point, when you know what you want to achieve, and you don't know if the story will cooperate. Hopefully we'll find out soon.

skylightdance December 4 2008, 01:29:03 UTC

That familar smell, yes, strong and dexterous man, oh yeah.

You're a bad girl Marilyn, and I love you for it.

mistressmarilyn December 5 2008, 08:12:45 UTC

You're a bad girl Marilyn, and I love you for it.

Hehe.