[Naruto] [Fic] Lifetimes

[starapple]

Title: Lifetimes
Author: starapple (martinique on ff.net)
Rating: T
Pairing: Tsunade/Jiraiya
Genre: Drama/Romance
Words: 1343
Warnings: Pre-time-skip spoilers, based within The Little Things Universe. Stand-alone, but it makes more sense if you've read that one. (see my ff.net profile)
Disclaimer: Naruto does not belong to me.
Summary: In which Jiraiya

Comments

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I have been curious about your writing and reading this has really not disappointed me. In fact, I think this is beyond lovely, comforting and soothing; your writing style is very tranquil, peaceful and profound. Meaning that this fanfic easily allowed me to immerse myself in it and enjoy it without being bothered by awkward sentence structure or glaring errors.

I like how you have portrayed Jiraiya and Tsunade’s relationship, showing the familiarity and trust they share. The whole piece has a very realistic feel to it; there is nothing implausible or childish to it. There were a few comical moments as well, pinpointing that they are only human beings and do share a few disagreements. I could ramble on more how well you have portrayed them, but then this review would become rather long. Rather, I would just like to tell you how much I adored the ending: it was tender, touching and sweet.

I don’t have anything constructive to say because this was just really lovely and enjoyable.

[starapple]

I'm glad that my writing comes across in that way, particularly in the latter half I was going for something akin to stillness. But you're also right about the errors, I'm shocked at how they managed to slip by me in the first place (and so many of them in the first paragraph no less).

Thank you for your lovely comment! Very much appreciated!