Highway Cloudbusting -- Part 2 (2/11)

[stardropdream]

Title: Highway Cloudbusting -- Part 2 (2/11)
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Characters: England, USA, mentions of other nations, unnamed American citizens
Pairing: Eventual England/USA
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter (but fic is NC-17 overall)
Warning: Possible cliches and predictability. Also deals with issues of sexuality and coming out, and

Comments

[twistedsheets10]

oh god this is delicious and we're gonna endure possibly 9 more chapters of lightning hot UST?

Dear God above, SIGN ME UP. ♥

[stardropdream]

I can't help it, I'm such a sucker for UST. Favorite kind of fic to read. Though I'm never sure if I execute it in writing as well as others, but, at least I get 11 chapters of practice! :D

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you like it so far. ♥

[ankhalier]

Oh man you are an amazing writer. I absolutely love this.

“I was not. I can’t help it if your bum takes up my entire field of vision when you’re walking in front of me. Honestly, how much do you weigh now?”

^ Laughed so fuckin' hard at this.

I'll be keeping my eye out for updates. And I never look for fanfiction updates. Ever.

[stardropdream]

Aaah thank you so much, you're far too kind. I definitely love writing (and love practicing) so it's always encouraging to know that people enjoy what I write. :)

I'll work hard on making updates in a timely manner. Thank you so much for reading, and I'm glad you like it. ♥

[galeaya]

>////<

ahahaha, America, stop being in denial already.. you too, England..

loved this chapter! <3

[stardropdream]

They both fail, alas!

Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad you liked it. ♥

[hakuku]

Ahhh I love the drunk bit, drunk England is always a love <3
I can't wait for the next chapters, hope you post the next soon! I usually don't have a thing for lengthy fics either but this one is adorable :)

[stardropdream]

Drunk England was stupidly fun to write. There will probably be more of him in the future haha. ♥

Thank you! I'm chugging away pretty readily on the next chapters, so hopefully I'll be able to post part 3 soon. :)

I usually don't go for lengthy fics myself. I like to stick to one-shots, and I usually don't read other people's chapterfics until they're complete or almost completed. But I was writing this and it just refused to be short so who am I to argue, I guess? \O_o/

In any case, thank you for giving it a chance. And I'm glad you like it so far!

[hakuku]

Haha I just love the interaction between these two. Its a bit more extra, rather than the typical reactions of what we expect from them. Plus the UST is flamiiinnng in this, so the interactions would be fun to play around with. I like the pace of it too, it doesn't seem like its dragging on~
Yea and I do agree i'd rather read something that's already finished XDD But darnit I had to read this when its still in progress haha

[metatronis]

This is really great! Your characterization is interesting and the building tension is wonderful. I'm a sucker for road trip stories, especially with all that Americana. Yay for neon lights, sleazy motels and tourist traps.

[stardropdream]

Ah, thank you! I'm still getting the hang of characterization for these two (part of the reason why I'm writing this, for the practice and because I cannot resist road trip stories haha) so I'm glad you like it so far. ♥