Highway Cloudbusting -- Part 6 (6/11)

Mar 10, 2010 00:17

Title: Highway Cloudbusting -- Part 6 (6/11)
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Characters: England, USA, mentions of other nations, unnamed American citizens
Pairing: Eventual England/USA
Rating: R/NC-17 for this chapter (but fic is NC-17 overall)
Warning: Possible cliches and predictability. Also deals with issues of sexuality and coming out, ( Read more... )

series: axis powers hetalia, chapterfic: highway cloudbusting, pairing: england/america, *mature

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lovelylurker March 10 2010, 08:39:21 UTC
*SLAMS FISTS ON TABLE*

HOT DAMN. I SCROLLED DOWN TO THE END OF THE PAGE TO SQUEAL ABOUT YOU UPDATING AND HAPPENED TO LOOK UP AND... AND... FINALLY.

Brb, reading and reviewing.

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lovelylurker March 10 2010, 09:16:24 UTC
America panted, “Let’s… let’s not talk about him.”

OH FRANCE. This is France, right?!

That was so freaking hot. And the way that England starting calling him "luv" and "dear," falling into pet names and being dominant and gentle with America at the same time... hnnng.

Fweh.

Anyway. Damnit Iggy, you're going to spoil things, aren't you?! So pessimistic... but then again, America trying to force them to get drunk just to kiss England speaks volumes.

I'll be waiting for the heartbreak next chapter. Something tells me the wake up... won't go well. Even if America doesn't act like an ass, England already seems set on doing so.

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buddha_loves_me March 10 2010, 09:18:54 UTC
Haha, America was actually talking about Jesus Christ there. Sorry if that wasn't clear. ♥

I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm a sucker for pet names and England topping hurr my kinks, let me show you them.

As for next chapter... I don't want to give anything away, but. I think/hope the chapter makes it clear what direction it's going in, haha. :x

Thanks again for reading. I'm glad that you liked it (lol said that twice, way to go self). I'm already working hard on getting the seventh part ready, so hopefully I'll be able to post it soon. ♥

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lovelylurker March 10 2010, 09:23:42 UTC
Haha, America was actually talking about Jesus Christ there. Sorry if that wasn't clear. ♥

Whoa.

Wait.

What.

*re-reads*

What the hell is wrong with me.

Excuse me, I'm going to go pick my mind out of the gutter now.

I shall wait with baited breath for chapter 7! O/

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twistedsheets10 March 10 2010, 09:22:24 UTC
OH FUCK.

BOYS. BOYS.

This is probably one of the most hearbreaking sex I've ever read. Hot, but breaks my heart.

Stupid, stupid Alfred. Silly, silly Iggy. Oh, England saw through you, lad. Using alcohol as an excuse just in case things don't work out. Both of them pretending to be drunk while having sex that they BOTH want but in denial of. Why guys, why?

“Neither,” America slurred, finally, after a long pause. He grinned, loopy. “Imma gonna hold you until you wake up.”

“No,” England breathed, and looked too sad. He lifted a hand and cupped America’s cheek. “… You won’t.”

BRB WEEPING. Oh England. Why do you do this to yourself?

Now I am dying to know which will America choose.

Also: Iggy using all those pet names = win.

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stardropdream March 10 2010, 09:28:25 UTC
fff thank you so much! I have such little practice with sex scenes that I never know how they'll be received. I was going for not-very-happy, so I'm glad I was successful in that respect, at least.

Why guys, why?
Because they suck. :( (and not in the good way, oh America~)

I love England petnames I don't even caaaare. idk if it could be called a kink, but good god do I love it so much.

Ahem... Thanks so much for reading! I'm really glad that you liked the chapter, and thank you for always leaving such lovely comments. *gets to work on the seventh chapter!*

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twistedsheets10 March 10 2010, 09:38:01 UTC
haha. Reading it I was muttering, "oh shit, oh fuck" from dread: Dread of how bad and sad this could all end up.

(but it was burning hot. TOP ENGLAND YES.)

Man, I keep imagining Iggy saying those names in that hot accent of his and I'm. Just. Melting. Heee. I love Iggy and pet names.

♥♥

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stardropdream March 10 2010, 09:40:02 UTC
I PROMISE THERE WILL BE A HAPPY ENDING! E-eventually... :D;;

England topping + using petnames = hottest thing ever.
The only way it could possibly be hotter would if he was a pirate. Unf. /omg fangirl

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hakuku March 10 2010, 09:27:29 UTC
Seriously whenever I see this get updated, it becomes the highlight of my week ( ... )

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stardropdream March 10 2010, 09:36:58 UTC
No worries, I love long reviews. It makes me really glad that people like my story enough to comment. ♥ So thank you very much! (And sorry if I destroyed your sleep schedule temporarily, haha.)

I'm so glad you didn't think I rushed it. I had a lot of worries about this chapter, namely that it was too rushed and that reusing the drinking would get old. Perhaps this time they mean it when they say they won't drink again (h-haha e_e). HAHA I'm sorry for the semi-cliffhanger. I'll work hard to get the chapter up soon, so hopefully the wait won't be that bad. ;3;b

I'm sure you've heard this a lot but you bring out the personalities in them so realistically.asdlghads; o///o It never ceases to make me happy to hear it, in any case! I'm really, really glad that I'm not totally botching up their characterizations. I'm having a lot of fun writing this story, so if I somehow messed up it would break my heart ( ... )

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malayu March 10 2010, 10:02:47 UTC
FUCKING FINALLY. in more ways than one!

It wasn't abrupt at all, and it makes sense for both of them to hide under the guise of alcohol to start uhm...getting intimate. And I love that you gave them both a chance to, somewhat speaking, top. And inexperienced America~

“Will you wake me up for an awkward talk?” “Or will you slip out like I’m just a tramp you’re done with?”

I kinda sorta started in awe at this. Pessimistic England is strangely awesome.

You know what. I wanted to leave a really long comment and all but words fail me. Would an 'I love you so much' suffice?

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stardropdream March 10 2010, 18:00:06 UTC
Ah, I'm glad. I tried to make it not abrupt and lead up to it, but also didn't want to drag the pace down, either. It was a lot of fun to write (even though I need more practice with sex scenes hurr durr) so I'm glad that everyone seems to be enjoying it thus far.

And ufufufu yes. I like it when sexual positions are switched up. And I think they're definitely the kind of couple (if you can call them that at the moment) that would switch it up and not conform to the same position every time. Plus, topping takes a lot more work, I'm sure America would just one day throw his lazy hands up and be all "oh god, you just do it!" *rambles*

An 'I love you so much' definitely suffices. alsdhgasd; I'm so glad that you liked the chapter, and the story. Thank you so, so much for reading. ;_;b

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malayu March 11 2010, 15:51:40 UTC
I'm sure America would just one day throw his lazy hands up and be all "oh god, you just do it!"

Wait, what. Ahahaha, why does that image amuses me so? I can so see it happening.

USUK is sorta the first sort of couple I could actually imagine trading places, trying kinks and fetisheshaving a healthy relationship. Also, there's so many awesome writers for the pairing, so yeah.

Um, um, by the way, by the way...good luck writing the next few parts kay?

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stardropdream March 11 2010, 18:13:46 UTC
Haha I know right? I think it'd just be hilarious. I'm waiting for the day when someone writes a fic like that (and/or I get off my lazy ass and write something like that).

Yeah, I think they'd definitely have a lot of problems. I mean, even once you get past their clashing personalities (which only leads to fail flirting, imho), there's still the political issues of their respective countries, and the distance between the two of them (physically and metaphorically). I think they'd have a lot of issues to work through, but once they got through it they'd be a pretty healthy couple.

Thank you so much! *determined fist clench* I'm already working hard on the next part! Hopefully I'll be able to get it up soon.

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ashira_jaganshi March 10 2010, 10:29:50 UTC
This just keeps getting better and better!!! I can't wait for the next update! <3 I love how guiding and domineering England was there.... ahhhh =////w////=

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stardropdream March 10 2010, 18:04:59 UTC
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad that you like the story so far (and guiding England ffff /loves him, omg fangirl)! I'll work hard to get the next update up soon! ♥

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