Comments | stare_at_walls: no thanks, i'm full

stare_at_walls

no thanks, i'm full

Dec 02, 2010 05:16

Title: no thanks, i'm full
Pairing: Kurt, Dave
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,551
Summary: Dave Karofsky wonders what he can do to make Kurt notice him
Spoilers/Warnings: Never Been Kissed
Disclaimer: Obviously not mine, if it was up to me, I'd make Kurtofsky obviously obviously canon, and Dave less hurty.

( If I lost enough weight, would Kurt Hummel be even remotely interested in me? )

glee!, fiction, fandom

Comments 8

arabella_w December 2 2010, 00:01:26 UTC

It's quite painful to see the way Kurt's words affected David. It'd be awesome if you write more ;)

Excellent done.

stare_at_walls December 2 2010, 13:57:19 UTC

thank you so much, and yes! more fic to come :)

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stare_at_walls December 2 2010, 13:58:20 UTC

i agree. i think kurt's hasty words affected dave on a deeper level, and i will not be surprised to this tackled even minutely on the series. thank you so much for reading.

fatal_scribbles December 2 2010, 18:17:32 UTC

This hurts. But I think this is where a lot of people's minds went when Kurt said those things and I wouldn't be surprised if the show went there, though perhaps not in such an extreme way... poor Dave, I want to cuddle him so much. This was really well-done, thanks for sharing :)

stare_at_walls December 3 2010, 10:52:36 UTC

thank you! i would think that glee might touch upon this topic lightly at least, and i don't think they'd do it this much though. but if they did i think it will become easier to open up that tentative friendship between dave and kurt. kurt having pity and later on, developing into a tentative friendship, and who knows if from there, a romantic storyline can come up.

sweetwaterpink December 3 2010, 10:32:31 UTC

Poor Karofsky! He took the diet to the extreme. Look forward to part deux. :)

stare_at_walls December 3 2010, 10:54:08 UTC

thank you! :) i will try to see if i can come up with a part deux, or trois :D

lisachanoando December 4 2010, 16:25:47 UTC

I opened this thinking "oh please, don't let the NotEating!Dave become a stereotype of this fandom", and was ready to not liking the story at all, but despite all my prejudices I loved it! Dave looks so weak, so sad, and the most important part of the story, for me, is when he realized that everything he's going through is his parents' fault. Ain't it like this for everybody? Parents always try to do what they think it's best for their children, but often they end fucking up their entire lives. Some kids are stronger than others, and they manage to keep on living without being too troubled from this, but other kids, kids like Dave, they are just weak and frightened and can't :( And that's why they end up hurting themselves ( ... )