Comments | stargate_las: Round 1 // Challenge 6

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Round 1 // Challenge 6 - RESULTS

Dec 05, 2010 18:54

.... and here are the results!

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!results, !round: #1, !round one - challenge 6

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QUESTIONS? needtakehave December 5 2010, 23:55:33 UTC

QUESTIONS?

Re: QUESTIONS? cyren_2132 December 5 2010, 23:59:13 UTC

I'm assuming that first cedargrove should be rinkafic...

Re: QUESTIONS? needtakehave December 6 2010, 00:07:01 UTC

LOL, yes :)

Re: QUESTIONS? rinkafic December 9 2010, 21:04:47 UTC

Did the feedbacks go out? I didn't see any. Only asking 'cause you said you delete on Wednesdays, so probably askin' too late anyway.

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VOTE FEEDBACK needtakehave December 5 2010, 23:57:30 UTC

VOTE FEEDBACK

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK cyren_2132 December 5 2010, 23:59:51 UTC

Feedback for cyren_2132 please.

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK somehowunbroken December 6 2010, 00:03:36 UTC

Feedback, please.

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK cedargrove December 6 2010, 00:04:50 UTC

would like to see feedback please...

Congrats to all those still in... shame to go out now, after all the recent stuff, but I'll stick around.

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cyren_2132 December 6 2010, 00:05:18 UTC

I'd love any thoughts, pro or con for "Love, Hope and Sacrifice." I wasn't sure how much background to give it -- did I need to go into the whole zatarc and Jack/Sam thing? Ultimately, I decided to gloss over it, especially since I was kind of going for a little bit of unrequited Teal'c/Sam subtext.

That's the other thing: I was hesitant to label it with anything like "Teal'c/Sam if you squint" because I think half the fun of subtext is seeing it, not having it pointed out for me. But then I imagine readers out looking for Teal'c/Sam-ish fic would appreciate the label. Maybe that's where a good summary comes in...

Love Hope and Sacrifice rinkafic December 6 2010, 02:08:23 UTC

I'm glad you didn't push the subtext, Cyren, it would have sent me looking in a different direction than the way I read what was presented, and I think then I would have wanted more than was there, being set up for it. I thought what you presented was simple, clean and concise and answered the prompt neatly.

Re: Love Hope and Sacrifice cyren_2132 December 6 2010, 19:05:50 UTC

Thanks! I'm actually not much of a shipper myself, and the note I was really trying to hit was that Teal'c cared so much about Sam that he would rather she hate him than herself. And as I was writing it, I figured that point could be taken as deep friendship (is that how you read it?) or as a shippy thing, which to me is the best kind of subtext.

And I'm glad you think it came out pretty clean, because that last sentence was a bear to punctuate.

stella_pegasi December 6 2010, 02:44:52 UTC

I enjoyed your story very much. As rinkafic said it was
"simple, clean and concise." To me, Teal'c action was very much in character and quite impactful.

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