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Round 1 // Challenge 12 - RESULTS

Mar 28, 2011 19:23

.... and here are the results!

( Results )

!results, !round: #1, !round one - challenge 12

Comments 17

QUESTIONS? needtakehave March 28 2011, 23:30:17 UTC

QUESTIONS?

VOTE FEEDBACK needtakehave March 28 2011, 23:30:55 UTC

VOTE FEEDBACK

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK geonncannon March 28 2011, 23:33:00 UTC

For "Joy in Mudville," please? I am completely unsurprised by this result. I'm just curious what people thought.

I'm in the final three!

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK rinkafic March 29 2011, 00:16:28 UTC

Geonncannon, I totally applaud the risk and the idea that you went with. As you warned, there was something off about the meter. I am only vaguely familiar with the original, so that totally could have been the fault of the original. I did love the line about Jack, mighty Jack stepping up, loved the image and it made me smile.

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK majorsamfan March 29 2011, 00:50:16 UTC

I applaud the risk-taking also!

And I enjoyed what you did with it.

Thread 9

majorsamfan March 29 2011, 00:51:26 UTC

ZOMGosh! is all I can say!

cyren_2132 March 29 2011, 01:32:10 UTC

*Wipes brow* Whew! Shortly after I posted, I noticed a missing apostrophe and thought for sure that would bounce me out, what with competition being so tough at this stage.

If anyone wants to talk pros or cons of "Just One Question," I'm game.

traycer_ March 29 2011, 03:59:32 UTC

Hee! I saw that and the abbreviations for Colonel which had me glaring. :) But I voted a different story as the worst for various other reasons - and besides, I had to laugh at your Major Matt Mason reference. lol Good job!

cyren_2132 March 29 2011, 04:07:39 UTC

Yeah, the abbreviation for colonel when attached to a name is my AP style habit getting the better of me. Sometimes I forget that the rest of the world doesn't need to use it. Glad you liked the Matt Mason reference. Sam at first didn't even really have much of a role until my second go-round when I couldn't think of a toy for Rodney to have bought. So I'm glad both of them popped up (also thought about mentioning a Matt Mason movie tie-in, but figured that would be a bit much. But it's all head canon, now!)

traycer_ March 29 2011, 04:09:53 UTC

I'm interested in hearing your thoughts on my story, All American, if you have a few moments to share! Thanks!!

cyren_2132 March 29 2011, 05:14:13 UTC

I had an issue where I couldn't tell if the entry was a standalone idea that we were just seeing snippet of or if it actually was meant to go with an episode that I couldn't quite remember. I felt like I was missing something. I also found Daniel to be a little too apathetic (though, I loved his baseball and hockey line.)

traycer_ March 29 2011, 13:05:23 UTC

I guess it was a stand alone because it really wasn't based on an episode. I just created a scenario and put the characters into it. :) Good point! Thanks!!