Fic: With Fire and Sword (3/8)

Apr 25, 2011 23:10

Part 2

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the_scary_kitty April 26 2011, 04:37:04 UTC
AAAAAHHHHH! *more flailing* Geeze, I'm on the edge of my seat already and the fighting hasn't even started yet.

The Asgard are back, and they brought the cannons! Yes! *pumps fist in triumph* Hopefully between that and the plan to trap the Wraith ships in the harbor, they'll be able to give the Wraith one heckuva spanking. Of course, with all the parallels to The Siege flying about, I have to wonder about the Great Cloaking Gambit.

Speaking of parallels, I cracked up at the parallel with the Teyla/Ronon sparring in Duet. Including how John went ballistic. *laughs* Ohhh yes, Ronon so wants Teyla. :D

Marcus and Kate! Took 'em long enough, darnit. And why do I have a bad feeling about Marcus telling Kate about the grotto passage? *nervously bites fingernails*

ETA: Ellis is still a jerk. You know, I rather hope he dies during the battle. *evil look*

Please don't make us wait too long for Part 4! *begs*

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vickysg1 April 26 2011, 08:09:18 UTC
THIS IS STILL SO AWESOME!!!

I love the fight between Teyla&Ronon! It was great! And yeah the Asgards are back!!! They're gonna help save the day! At least, I hope so!

And Kate&Marcus are back!! I'm glad he talked to her, but I do hope it wasn't the last time they talked! It can't be the last time they talked!

Also, the scene between Carson&Laura is so cute! Please, let her and the baby be fine. And let Carson be fine, too! I iz scared!

Can't wait for part 4!

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angelqueen04 April 26 2011, 15:08:18 UTC
*another high-pitched squeal*

How is it that this story gets even more amazing with every post?! Wow, you guys really went to town on it! I love the details, the plans being made for the battle, the letters being sent out to Atalan's allies, the infirmary, the secret getaway passage, and all the rest! Excellent!

I love how you're paralleling The Siege (though, I hope this doesn't mean that Peter Grodin might die, because the show nearly killed me with that as it is) and other moments in the show, as well as the moments that are purely Ren. It's gold! :D

Ah, Ellis, he's such a bastard, no matter what 'verse he's in, isn't he? *shakes head* He better lose the attitude and get used to the fact that it's women who are running the country, before one of those women decides to slap him silly.

Excellent, outstanding job! *applauds*

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sache8 April 26 2011, 16:19:12 UTC
Whew. Reconciliations and uncertain goodbyes galore.

The Ronon scene was my favorite, I think. And the recreation of the Ronon/Teyla/John confrontation in "Duet" (Hee!). But I really feel like I'm inside his head, and I can "see" him really clearly too. I liked the test with the Satedan sword.

Okay, so the Asgard are already here. I speculate that Iolan will come with some reinforcements by sea at some point mid-siege...

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the_scary_kitty April 26 2011, 22:20:03 UTC
I speculate that Iolan will come with some reinforcements by sea at some point mid-siege...

I've also been thinking this, as Iolan is really in the best position to give a seaborne assist, and it'll provide another parallel with "The Siege." Even though Caldwell won't be at the helm of the rescue ship this time. Drat! ;P

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melyanna April 27 2011, 01:57:56 UTC
Heh. Iolan is about a week away in favorable winds. Sorry. ;)

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the_scary_kitty April 27 2011, 02:48:13 UTC
Darnit! There's always got to be something. ;P

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pheniox_girl April 26 2011, 18:24:57 UTC
Yes. Yes. And YES!! It's only the third chapter and it's already got me on the edge of my seat so to speak. I cannot wait til the fighting starts.... Or wait to see the fall out. Simply put I'm love this story more then "The Polotics of Marriage" right now, which is hard cause it was def my favorite this season.

Speaking of... How many more stories this season?? It's gonna kill me having to wait for next season to start! :(

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miera_c April 26 2011, 20:30:54 UTC
This is actually the final season. We are not 100% sure how many more stories it will include at this point.

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