Fic: With Fire and Sword (5/8)

May 02, 2011 17:24

Previously:

Part I
Part II
Part III
Part IV

Part V )

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rebakathy May 2 2011, 22:44:07 UTC
You have to end it there huh? I really enjoyed this chapter! Most excellent!

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mathgirl24 May 2 2011, 23:25:02 UTC
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Looooooooooorne!!

I was on the edge of my seat the whole way through this, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Lorne!

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angelqueen04 May 2 2011, 23:26:37 UTC
*flails* ZOMG you and your evil cliffhangers!! :D

Excellent job! Love the details of the battle! You guys did an excellent job portraying the chaos of it, and the rapid thinking of the defenders.

Eep! Elizabeth! Kate! Hopefully they'll manage to take their new attacker out, or that Ronon and John will get to them in time. *bites nails*

Excellent update!

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the_scary_kitty May 3 2011, 02:07:41 UTC
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

OMG, Lorne! How could he possibly survive a second brush with death? He can't be that lucky, could he? *wails*

Teyla was fantastic in battle, and Rodney is The Man for going ahead with firing the cannon a second time. Hopefully he wasn't too badly injured. I'm scared for Daniel. *wibbles*

And oh crap, ELIZABETH!!!!! KATE!!!!! Please oh please, let John and Ronon save them! *wails some more, then faints*

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vickysg1 May 3 2011, 13:23:23 UTC
All I could think right now is: OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!

LORNE!!!!!! And where's Daniel????

And let John and Ronon arrive in time to save Kate & Elizabeth! Please, please, please!

BTW, you're really evil to leave us with this cliffhanger!

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