Title: Adjustments Authors: miera_c and melyanna Rating: PG Summary: In the aftermath of the battle with the Wraith, the queen and her court pick up the pieces.
Excellent way to pick up after the battle, there being multiple threads resuming all at the same time. Nice!
Aww, Lord Benjamin's gone! :( How sad! But it'll be interesting to see how Elizabeth handles the need for a new chancellor in the college. She's been Queen for just over a year, and she's gone through two already -- Lord George and Lord Benjamin. At least, I assume George was her chanellor. He seemed to be doing all those chancellor-type things until he got sick and eventually retired back to Hammond.
Great job! Looking forward to seeing what comes next! :)
Oh no, not Lord Benjamin! That was an unpleasant surprise, though I suppose was the point. :( I'm definitely curious to know who the new chancellor will be.
Peter! Thank goodness it looks like he's going to be okay! *wibbles*
I'm still cracking up over Lord David. He totally knew! I figured he suspected, but still, it was really funny watching him make Lorne squirm. Heehee! I also kept cracking up over the scene where Rodney brings that toy wagon he made for Moira. That was so very cute! *squees and twirls happily*
I love love love the scene where John is looking at the grave markers along the beach and getting that glimpse into Atalan's history. Gave me lots of good shivers. As did seeing John and Elizabeth alone again. Even if they didn't snog. *winks*
First, yeah, Peter is awake! He's going to be okay, right? Lord Benjamin is dead, but i look forward to Elizabeth appointing a new chancellor. I would love it if it were Teyla, 'cos she'd be perfect for this job. And I love that Jack is relieved that she's not considering him!
Lord David knew about Marcus and Kate! Awesome! And he gave them his blessing! That was great, especially his conversation with Marcus.
I love the scenes with the men on the mainland. John find out about a bit of Atalan's history, and Ronon wondering where to go from there. But I don't want him to leave already!
Also, Elizabeth&John being alone, and talking about what happened the last time they were left alone at the same place was great. If I didn't know better, I'd think Elizabeth would start teasing him mercilessly to see if he can keep his hands to himself.
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Aww, Lord Benjamin's gone! :( How sad! But it'll be interesting to see how Elizabeth handles the need for a new chancellor in the college. She's been Queen for just over a year, and she's gone through two already -- Lord George and Lord Benjamin. At least, I assume George was her chanellor. He seemed to be doing all those chancellor-type things until he got sick and eventually retired back to Hammond.
Great job! Looking forward to seeing what comes next! :)
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Whew!!! Peter is conscious, thank God!
I can see Lorne being all nervous and a perfect gentleman at the same time while talking to Lord Heightmeyer.
And John and Elizabeth. Alone. *grins*
Great job, eagerly awaiting the next part!!!
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Peter! Thank goodness it looks like he's going to be okay! *wibbles*
I'm still cracking up over Lord David. He totally knew! I figured he suspected, but still, it was really funny watching him make Lorne squirm. Heehee! I also kept cracking up over the scene where Rodney brings that toy wagon he made for Moira. That was so very cute! *squees and twirls happily*
I love love love the scene where John is looking at the grave markers along the beach and getting that glimpse into Atalan's history. Gave me lots of good shivers. As did seeing John and Elizabeth alone again. Even if they didn't snog. *winks*
Bring on Part 2! :)
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First, yeah, Peter is awake! He's going to be okay, right? Lord Benjamin is dead, but i look forward to Elizabeth appointing a new chancellor. I would love it if it were Teyla, 'cos she'd be perfect for this job. And I love that Jack is relieved that she's not considering him!
Lord David knew about Marcus and Kate! Awesome! And he gave them his blessing! That was great, especially his conversation with Marcus.
I love the scenes with the men on the mainland. John find out about a bit of Atalan's history, and Ronon wondering where to go from there. But I don't want him to leave already!
Also, Elizabeth&John being alone, and talking about what happened the last time they were left alone at the same place was great. If I didn't know better, I'd think Elizabeth would start teasing him mercilessly to see if he can keep his hands to himself.
Can't wait for part 2!
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Yay for update!
Looking forward to seeing more of this story.
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