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Learning Lessons: The (Long) Road to Faberrittana (9/?)

Sep 28, 2011 15:49

Chapter Title: Running Scared
Author: Stargirl888
Word Count: About 4900
Spoilers: None
Pairing: Quinn/Rachel, Brittany/Santana, discussions of Rachel/Santana
Rating: T
WARNINGS: Alcohol consumption by young minors
Disclaimer: Not mine never has been and unfortunately never will be :(
Summary: Brittany’s sister makes a silly decision and Brittany talks to ( Read more... )

glee, pairing: santana/rachel, learning lessons verse, friendship:rachel/brittany, pairing:quinn/rachel, santana/brittany

Comments 7

blueashke September 28 2011, 18:07:36 UTC

On the one hand yes, the Stacy portion seemed unimportant and a bit predictable - however, it's important to reinforce the characterization of Brittany you go with - that of a smart young woman who has a brain and just plays dumb at school. Plus it was well written, so that's always a bonus.

The track you're taking with the introduction of Pezberry and Brittany's understanding along with Quinn's immediate dismissal is fabulous. Speaking as one who has been in those types of relationships both good and bad, you hit the nail on the head. I can't wait to see where you go with it next!

stargirl888 September 28 2011, 18:52:34 UTC

Yay! You're the only person whose mentioned the Stacy bit!

I'm glad that you think I'm taking the right track with the girls, because I was a bit nervous about how its playing out.

Thanks for commenting!!

shyone21 September 28 2011, 21:04:36 UTC

I like the way both Quinn and Brittany are handling this, I'm just really interested in seeing how all four of them will eventually grow to be in this relationship. We've got Pezberry now, but we haven't seen much growth in Brittany's feelings towards Rachel or Quinn.

I just would hate to see any of the girls getting left out.

stargirl888 September 28 2011, 21:31:36 UTC

Dont worry, none of them will get left out. I have Quitt already planned out which will be coming along next and then the other pairings will develope after that :)

Thanks for commenting!

shyone21 September 29 2011, 12:24:20 UTC

Sorry, I'm just impatient. lol. We won't be missing out on Faberry and Brittana as these other couples are explored though, right?

stargirl888 September 29 2011, 14:26:35 UTC

Lol, no, there will still be some Brittana and Faberry :)

ducksticks October 2 2011, 21:21:36 UTC

You didn't lie when you said this is going to be a long road xD

But I liked the Stacy part! Quinn, baby you're so scared. I want to Brittany to calm her =P