The call

Oct 10, 2009 13:30

Title: The call 
Chapter: 1/1
POV: First person, Harry's POV 
Author: Read more... )

rating: r, genre: romance, character: dougie poynter, oneshot, pairing: pudd, genre: song!fic, character: harry judd, genre: angst

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theunwantedpath October 10 2009, 12:52:49 UTC
this is..wow

So, cute?! I'm still looking for the right word, actually. I can totally picture this situation, so cute, so lovely.

I especially loved that part:

"You're annoying and crazy and loud and you say the most embarrassing and inappropriate things at times. You're a bit clingy and demanding and childish. But you're also sweet, shy, quiet and most of all, caring. You care about a lot of things even though you hardly ever voice your opinions. You are deep, Dougie."

kinda shows, that no ones perfect, but still perfect for one person in the world that deeply cares.

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justapicture October 10 2009, 13:05:17 UTC
I'm abslutely speechless. This was some brilliant piece of writing. It's beautiful!

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hearts_slash October 12 2009, 11:41:12 UTC
n'awww. this made me smile. a lot. this is so beautifully wonderful and i wanna squish and just doesn't let go.

my favorite part would be this:

I see the change in you when you finally get it. I see how you stand up straighter, how the light returns to your eyes and how your lips curl into a soft smile that's getting bigger and bigger.

I just called to say I love you
I just called to say how much I care
I just called to say I love you
And I mean it from the bottom of my heart

And then you practically jump into my arms, wrap your arms around my neck and your legs around my waist, right there on your doorstep. Anyone could see us here, the neighbours, the press, fans... but I honestly couldn't care less. Your lips on mine, kissing me hungrily, that's all that matters.i can practically see how dougie just starts to smile and then just jumps into harry's arm. there's no logic there and no thoughts and no nothing and it's just pure and simple and doing the only thing you can think about doing at that exact moment ( ... )

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q_rai October 12 2009, 17:19:52 UTC
What a beautiful Pudd fic! ♥
Sweet and sad at the same time :)
I think the characters of Harry and Dougie and their feelings for each other shone through very nicely ♥

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manuanya October 12 2009, 22:00:20 UTC
i didn't reply to this earlier cause, clearly, i suck but i love it. a lot.

what i love most about is how, despite the hint of angst, carefree it is, how it's happy and sweet and full of love. full of them and no one else, if you know what i mean.

not that i haven't let recent events influence my fics 'cause i did but, in the end, we're living in a fictional bubble and we don't have to deal with what happens right now and i'm so so so so glad you put that aside and create something new, something fresh, something with harryanddougie (no space between them). it's perfect ♥

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