OKAY SO. ARE YOU READY FOR THE COMMENT THAT NEVER ENDS, FIZZY? ARE YOU, PUNK? Here Goes :D ::
First of all; have I mentioned that I love how you bring speed into their lives? Shootouts and running on foot, swimming and gunning it on a boat, it's all explosions and limbs and no-time, no-time, and GOSH, that's something that's lacking in Reborn fic. You MAKE IT the Mafia, you make it the adventure, you make it that twist of good and evil until it's a gray area swirling so fast that it's just -the moment-, all adrenaline, and morals that are unsure. I -love that- about your writing. Here are bits that especially grabbed me;
There's a collision with an unsuspecting tourist that almost happens, but doesn't, because he narrowly avoids it by cutting right beside her and ending up right ahead.Attention to detail? Ohyes. How many times do we have moments where we're secretly proud of slipping in between people without colliding? Just that little bit of excitement that sparks and then we forget it. But you DON'T forget it, and that's amazing
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Now you have! I'm just -- REALLY in love with the idea of these guys & guns, haha. I'm really fond of guns; they always make me so HAPPY for some reason alfkajf. SO 8059 + guns + mafia = ding ding ding! Happy Fizzy is happy. I'm really glad you like it though & picked up on that. Reborn! fandom's in dire need of ACTION. DRAMA. GUN SHOOTOUTS. I mean, it's the best thing there is. D: Even though this is the first time I've really sat down and wrote action hahaflakfj.
Attention to detail? Ohyes. How many times do we have moments where we're secretly proud of slipping in between people without colliding? Just that little bit of excitement that sparks and then we forget it. But you DON'T forget it, and that's amazing.
HAHA I tend to obsess over detail when I write LONG FICS. Like, I actually have to be able to picture it in my head & the reader has to, as well. Otherwise, the image is pointless alkfjaf. So I try not to miss a detail, no matter how small or forgettable it is. >:
These guys + Guns = Pret. amazing, seriously. Face paced and badass; they're built for it, with squeaks and whimpers of failget, laughter, and dorkdom. And YES, I cannot tell you ENOUGH how much Reborn needs more fics like this. ACTION + FIZZY; two things it cannot do without.
--I love that about your writing. The pointless details are what make it -full-.
--Don't be so nervous with Yamamoto~ you've got him ensnared, and hsi character flourishes with you.
--ifiaehiha SO CREEPY, jeez.
--That he will, in pieces and parts, always getting more himself =O
....HEY. WHAT. WHAT. ...NO. NO IT DOESN'T. =< (8D everything you write works, gtfo.)
♥ I WOULD GO "PLACEHOLDER LOL" since it's five am and I can't properly review, but my placeholders LAST FOREVER and THAT IS PRETTY GAY.
But -- ! Great job, you should write more of that action that you say you suck at rofdlksfjasdla. Congratulations for the longest fic you have ever written, it is delicious and probably my favorite so far from your writing. :D Maybe I'm just a sucker for action, but I really like this style.
jkalfdjl;asf This was fucking awesome. It took me a bit to really get into the style, but once I did, I was hooked. The writing is absolutely beautiful, and you do such amazing work with Gokudera and Yamamoto. ♥ Very nice bittersweet theme throughout as well! asjklf;a *flails some moar!*
OKAY SO. Am totally looking forward to more from you as well! :D Thank you for linking me and self-pimping, because jakdslfjl;asdf GOOD FIC IS ALWAYS GOOD.
Why thank you. 8D Haha, yeah, my style is kind of strange -- but hurrah! Thank you so much. They're v. fun to write about when they're like this. 'cause YAY ACTION. ♥
Haha, ditto me on that for you! :D Not a problem. Just make sure to always self-pimp @ me too HAHA. So I can flail all over you aflkjf. ♥♥♥
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First of all; have I mentioned that I love how you bring speed into their lives? Shootouts and running on foot, swimming and gunning it on a boat, it's all explosions and limbs and no-time, no-time, and GOSH, that's something that's lacking in Reborn fic. You MAKE IT the Mafia, you make it the adventure, you make it that twist of good and evil until it's a gray area swirling so fast that it's just -the moment-, all adrenaline, and morals that are unsure. I -love that- about your writing. Here are bits that especially grabbed me;
There's a collision with an unsuspecting tourist that almost happens, but doesn't, because he narrowly avoids it by cutting right beside her and ending up right ahead.Attention to detail? Ohyes. How many times do we have moments where we're secretly proud of slipping in between people without colliding? Just that little bit of excitement that sparks and then we forget it. But you DON'T forget it, and that's amazing ( ... )
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Now you have! I'm just -- REALLY in love with the idea of these guys & guns, haha. I'm really fond of guns; they always make me so HAPPY for some reason alfkajf. SO 8059 + guns + mafia = ding ding ding! Happy Fizzy is happy. I'm really glad you like it though & picked up on that. Reborn! fandom's in dire need of ACTION. DRAMA. GUN SHOOTOUTS. I mean, it's the best thing there is. D: Even though this is the first time I've really sat down and wrote action hahaflakfj.
Attention to detail? Ohyes. How many times do we have moments where we're secretly proud of slipping in between people without colliding? Just that little bit of excitement that sparks and then we forget it. But you DON'T forget it, and that's amazing.
HAHA I tend to obsess over detail when I write LONG FICS. Like, I actually have to be able to picture it in my head & the reader has to, as well. Otherwise, the image is pointless alkfjaf. So I try not to miss a detail, no matter how small or forgettable it is. >:
Your Yamamoto. His ( ... )
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--I love that about your writing. The pointless details are what make it -full-.
--Don't be so nervous with Yamamoto~ you've got him ensnared, and hsi character flourishes with you.
--ifiaehiha SO CREEPY, jeez.
--That he will, in pieces and parts, always getting more himself =O
....HEY. WHAT. WHAT. ...NO. NO IT DOESN'T. =< (8D everything you write works, gtfo.)
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♥ I WOULD GO "PLACEHOLDER LOL" since it's five am and I can't properly review, but my placeholders LAST FOREVER and THAT IS PRETTY GAY.
But -- ! Great job, you should write more of that action that you say you suck at rofdlksfjasdla. Congratulations for the longest fic you have ever written, it is delicious and probably my favorite so far from your writing. :D Maybe I'm just a sucker for action, but I really like this style.
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never gonna give you up, never gonna let you LOSE THE GAME
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Trust me I'd rather be reading this than uhh what I'm reading today SO AUGH IHU FOR TEMPTING ME. UHHH. That doesn't make sense.
SEE WHAT TOO MUCH TEXTBOOK READING IS DOING TO ME.
PS GAME
PS TI-TIME IS TICKING TICKING
PS ILUUUU
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OKAY SO. Am totally looking forward to more from you as well! :D Thank you for linking me and self-pimping, because jakdslfjl;asdf GOOD FIC IS ALWAYS GOOD.
Is it okay to watch this journal? 8DD;;
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Haha, ditto me on that for you! :D Not a problem. Just make sure to always self-pimp @ me too HAHA. So I can flail all over you aflkjf. ♥♥♥
Of course! I'm adding you right now. :D
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