I LOVE GAMMA/DINO it's my second favorite pairing and thus, thank you for writing a fic in which they interact (extensively, too!!). AWESOME. Thank you for making it believable, too. XD
This is really intriguing, this whole fic. Your take on Dino is really interesting, little things I would never think to put. It's cool. I noticed a few between past and present tense, but after that --
What struck me most was Dino smiling after hearing of Ryohei and the rest's deaths. That and how he spared Squalo a moment of sadness, but moved cleanly on and he's never brought up again. I think it's an interesting interpretation of the way Dino has changed in ten years -- I like that it's those little things that show he's not who he used to be.
Zucco! That was a nice reversion to what Dino probably looks back to as a shameful point in his life; it's lovely foreshadowing.
Good luck on the minibang fic thingie. I haven't even decided what I'm going to do for it yet. XD THAT'S HOW I ROLL, MAN.
HAHA OH GOD WHAT. I didn't -- even -- see it that way -- WHY ARE YOU PUTTING IDEAS IN MY HEAD -- what. Uhm! No problem? I actually bugged Ari lots with her take on Gamma 'cause I'm kind of alkjfalkfaj @ that cool-headed asshole. A MYSTERY.
Ogod, tenses are the bane of my existence. ): I'll never nail them down properly. But thanks, haha. My headcanon for him in TYLverse is kind of WEIRD, but it all makes sense in my head. I CAN GO ON TOO but that's not the point here alkfjaf. Just -- THANKS. 'cause I kind of really look up to you a lot & your take on him & so I'm like GAH IT'S LAI D8 SCARED NOW, but yes. /ramble
Haha, I like Zucco. 8D Zucco is cool. -- I wanted him to do more but akljfaljfa gotlazylololol.
Oh, man. GOOD LUCK TOO. I already know what I'ma do, but LOL still plotting the entire thing out, changing things & adding things. XD WE CAN ROLL AWESOMELY TOGETHER.
Loved this fic. I haven't been paying much attention to the TYL arc because Dino has been missing from it and it's not that interesting to me, but I really liked this story. Great moment with Dino acknowledging Squallo's death.
Glad you do, Rebbe!! ♥ Haha, I think heartbreaking works. 'cause it's like -- such a grim situation, but there they are, talking like two people having a cup of coffee. Dino is awfully hard to write. D: His thoughts are just lkjflakfja.
YES. I had to -- shove that in there. 'cause I like my grotesque stuff.
"The Varia is an elite squad. I'm sure they won't go down that easily," is how he starts, calmly, securely, "And as for Sasagawa Ryohei-he's the Vongola's Sun Guardian. He'll be fine." I like this part~~ it's like dino's trying to convince himself through his own words..
i like how you said he "starts" to say it at least. :D which means, that he might change as he talks
"There's no way-" they're dead. But he can't say this out loud, can't bring himself to finish the sentence. It would almost feel like he was jinxing it, if he did. Exaaaaaaaaactly yessssssssssssssssss!! DINO! i love it XD
MORE ROMARIO ANGST AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
"But you don't have to worry about them. It's just you and me, wait... DINO HAS NO ONE AROUND HIM? D:
It only takes a few seconds later for Dino's men to appear, armed and ready to protect their boss too. OH WHEW
"I forgot that I've brought a friend along the way.OH FUCK please don't tell me
( ... )
BECAUSE. D: Ten years in the future & -- I just can't see him not dying. If mafia life doesn't get him, it's something natural that will, haha.
OH CRAP IT IS SQUALO's HEAD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
SORRY HAHA lafkajf. I kind of laughed here -- UHM -- I'm a horrible person -- er, it had to happen. 8D I just liked that image when it popped in my head, so I was like. MUST WRITE IT.
too cool~~~ *.* how you brought back the scene from the beginning scene~
I really like having my fics come around in full-circles, or at least reflect parts of the fics from the beginning at the end? 'cause it feels more complete that way. Or maybe I'm just weird like that.
& yes, I killed Dino. D: I never said this was gonna be a happy fic, haha.
Anyway, thanks so much for reading!! ♥3♥ Am v. glad you liked it.
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SO GOOOOOOOOD what are you saying you write fantastic. 8Db
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Ahahfhaflkaj, thanks.
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This is really intriguing, this whole fic. Your take on Dino is really interesting, little things I would never think to put. It's cool. I noticed a few between past and present tense, but after that --
What struck me most was Dino smiling after hearing of Ryohei and the rest's deaths. That and how he spared Squalo a moment of sadness, but moved cleanly on and he's never brought up again. I think it's an interesting interpretation of the way Dino has changed in ten years -- I like that it's those little things that show he's not who he used to be.
Zucco! That was a nice reversion to what Dino probably looks back to as a shameful point in his life; it's lovely foreshadowing.
Good luck on the minibang fic thingie. I haven't even decided what I'm going to do for it yet. XD THAT'S HOW I ROLL, MAN.
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HAHA OH GOD WHAT. I didn't -- even -- see it that way -- WHY ARE YOU PUTTING IDEAS IN MY HEAD -- what. Uhm! No problem? I actually bugged Ari lots with her take on Gamma 'cause I'm kind of alkjfalkfaj @ that cool-headed asshole. A MYSTERY.
Ogod, tenses are the bane of my existence. ): I'll never nail them down properly. But thanks, haha. My headcanon for him in TYLverse is kind of WEIRD, but it all makes sense in my head. I CAN GO ON TOO but that's not the point here alkfjaf. Just -- THANKS. 'cause I kind of really look up to you a lot & your take on him & so I'm like GAH IT'S LAI D8 SCARED NOW, but yes. /ramble
Haha, I like Zucco. 8D Zucco is cool. -- I wanted him to do more but akljfaljfa gotlazylololol.
Oh, man. GOOD LUCK TOO. I already know what I'ma do, but LOL still plotting the entire thing out, changing things & adding things. XD WE CAN ROLL AWESOMELY TOGETHER.
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Huh? What?
Dino's finally been mentioned in the TYL arc? And connected to Gamma?
When did this happen? Can I start paying attention to Reborn again?
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YES. I had to -- shove that in there. 'cause I like my grotesque stuff.
Thank you for reading! & thanks, haha. ♥♥♥
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WHY?????????????????????? ;_;
you already know the rest hehe
"The Varia is an elite squad. I'm sure they won't go down that easily," is how he starts, calmly, securely, "And as for Sasagawa Ryohei-he's the Vongola's Sun Guardian. He'll be fine."
I like this part~~ it's like dino's trying to convince himself through his own words..
i like how you said he "starts" to say it at least. :D which means, that he might change as he talks
"There's no way-" they're dead. But he can't say this out loud, can't bring himself to finish the sentence. It would almost feel like he was jinxing it, if he did.
Exaaaaaaaaactly yessssssssssssssssss!! DINO! i love it XD
MORE ROMARIO ANGST AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
"But you don't have to worry about them. It's just you and me,
wait... DINO HAS NO ONE AROUND HIM? D:
It only takes a few seconds later for Dino's men to appear, armed and ready to protect their boss too.
OH WHEW
"I forgot that I've brought a friend along the way.OH FUCK please don't tell me ( ... )
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omg.... T.T
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WHY?????????????????????? ;_;
BECAUSE. D: Ten years in the future & -- I just can't see him not dying. If mafia life doesn't get him, it's something natural that will, haha.
OH CRAP IT IS SQUALO's HEAD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
SORRY HAHA lafkajf. I kind of laughed here -- UHM -- I'm a horrible person -- er, it had to happen. 8D I just liked that image when it popped in my head, so I was like. MUST WRITE IT.
too cool~~~ *.* how you brought back the scene from the beginning scene~
I really like having my fics come around in full-circles, or at least reflect parts of the fics from the beginning at the end? 'cause it feels more complete that way. Or maybe I'm just weird like that.
& yes, I killed Dino. D: I never said this was gonna be a happy fic, haha.
Anyway, thanks so much for reading!! ♥3♥ Am v. glad you liked it.
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well no, ahahaha it's one of those scary realizations huh? XD XD
i also enjoy fics that comes in full circles. :D that way it's more fun to re-read the fic hehehe.
you KILLED DINO!! MURDERER!!! XD
I re-read it several times already, but you already know that hur hur.
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