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Aug 12, 2008 09:12

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[gift], fandom: katekyo hitman reborn!

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takashima_tsu August 12 2008, 22:56:45 UTC
NO WORDS CAN DESCRIBE HOW AWESOME THIS IS. ♥

I have like, a Yamamoto-esque smile on my face right now.
BIG SMILE IS BIG.

Stylist!Gokudera amuses me. I can just imagine him with his hair back in a ponytail and his stylish glasses. :>

I really like the formatting you used; the prompts draw you into another time and place. VERY cool. ♥

I don't ship 8018 at all (8059♥♥♥) but this was an enjoyable read. :D

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stargrind August 12 2008, 23:01:04 UTC
BUT YOU JUST GAVE ME WORDS -- I mean. ♥♥♥

Haha, I have one of those grins now too. /o 'cause of this comment. Thank you so much.

And LOL YES. I can totally see him working away on design sketches and other things like that. XD It's a funny image.

Thank you for that! I tried to make it sound like the pictures were happening somewhere else, but not really at the same time, haha.

Again, thank you for reading! :D (8059 is my OTP too. /o) ♥♥♥

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alsie August 13 2008, 01:55:43 UTC
The fact that this was both hilarious and sexy at the SAME TIME kinda made me go WTH while laughing. Yet it's also awesomely written and IC. And I don't even care much for 8018...but this WORKED.

Anyway right. AWESOME JOB. I loved it. 8)

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stargrind August 13 2008, 03:07:21 UTC
Was it hilarious because of Gokudera and sexy because of Hibari and Yamamoto? XD 'cause hahahaflakfj. Oh man. I DIDN'T EITHER ... until this. 8|

THANK YOU. ♥♥♥ /o

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gomimushi August 13 2008, 14:08:55 UTC
Oh my god. I just got led here by rukawagf's journal. I actually really don't like this pairing, but the idea of them as models made me fangirl like mad and I couldn't resist AT ALL. XD

I love the way you've captured the dimension in which this pairing works -- the mutual challenge between them, and the way their totally opposing personalities play against each other. Hibari's quiet ferocity comes off in his actions and I love the way you've written in Yama's easygoing inner voice (especially his laugh) ^^' The chemistry between them is so tangible in the first part, 1880? ahahaha XD <3

Also I love you for somehow working some 8059 and especially 1859 into it too. Jealous Gokudera is jealous, and it's hysterical. xD

The formatting is gorgeous, too. You just need the photos to fill in the gaps! xD Bribe someone to draw it? omg. would so fund that You and runesque have the unique ability to make me wish I had the dough to walk into an Armani outlet and buy a suit. *flails* Also, if Gokudera's Systema C.A.I. really existed as a styling company I'd ( ... )

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stargrind August 13 2008, 23:05:51 UTC
I actually wrote this without an inkling of liking the pairing either. But YES, shoving them together as models was just -- irresistible. I have no idea why. XD

Thank you, thank you. Haha, I was completely clueless with how they work together, to be honest, 'cause like I said, I didn't ship this pairing at all, so I have no idea what the fans see -- other than Hibari doesn't like to lose, and Yamamoto doesn't either, but Yamamoto's more likely to just go with it while Hibari'll throw a fit if he loses. XD And yes! I kind of lost that chemistry in the later parts, I think, but. orz

HAHA those two pairings -- are what I ship, and I couldn't resist it. 8D I love Gokudera when he's being jealous over something completely ridiculous.

Oh man, I wish I can find someone to bribe. XD But beanclam up there offered a bribe to draw one, except it's gonna be for the next fic I'll write ffff. And runesque's just. Amazing. ;w; I had to look up suits and stuff for this fic and -- could just not stop gawking at what AX had. But expensive suits are expensive. XD ( ... )

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gomimushi August 14 2008, 03:39:22 UTC
hahaha, that's why it works so well, I suppose. If you're trying to find a way for the pairing to work. It's the only way I can see it happening anyway, and the only reason I can think of to ship it. It's a lovely dynamic though, and the images in my head are *gorgeous* bwahah. I think you kept the chemistry, except that from Yama's side it's a little less tense. When Hibari starts off, it's just that much more tangible. I gues. *laughs ( ... )

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stargrind August 14 2008, 05:23:41 UTC
Yeah, I know what you mean by that. I'm sort of just using this AU!verse as an excuse to explore different pairings/how their dynamics will work/make them do faggotry-related things without worrying too much about canon interaction and whatnot. 8D But ahah, I'm glad you find them gorgeous! I really tried my best to find the best poses (sort of), but then I ended up with just going with whatever came to my mind, haha. XD And yeah, I agree with you on how Yamamoto lost his edgeness a bit -- that was my bad, haha -- but oh well. I hope it still worked out in the end somehow. Or maybe he just lost his focus 'cause Hibari was too much to handle. 8D

rukawagf is to blame for 1859, man. That crazy girl. XD While 8059 has been my OTP for life lafka. And YES, I love totallyindenial!Gokudera too, because it's just. So. Funny. *A* But hahaha, Hibari seems the type to just make Gokudera's life harder -- and with the backstory I gave them in this AU!verse (which is pretty much them doing a LOT of gay photoshoots together) sort of gives them a perpetually ( ... )

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idiedcauseofyou August 13 2008, 16:56:55 UTC
*nosebleeds* *shoots self*

KYAAAAAAAAAAAA

let me say for once that you.are.a.GENIUS. I really love the way you write and the details in between~ Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait to read more :D

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stargrind August 13 2008, 23:06:34 UTC
Thank you so much for reading!

I'm sorry for the nosebleed! XD

There'll definitely be more. I hope to finish one up pretty soon, as long as I don't ADD off, haha. ♥♥♥

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I CAN LOVE YOU A LONG TIME dani3lr August 14 2008, 01:38:26 UTC
I think this just adds on to the effect of rune's mafia models + branded clothes art.

8018 IS SO HOT AND IF THAT'S HOW THE PHOTOGS GET THEIR BEST ANGLES N EXPRESSIONS ON CAMERA HELL I WANT TO BE THERE NOSEBLEEDING WITH THEM TOO ja;lsdkfj;alsdkf;lgh;lakj;lkfaf

THANK YOU FOR THE ELABORATIONS! I CAN PICTURE THEM IN MY HEAD AND THAT'S VERY, VERY SEXY ♥♥

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OH SNAP -- LOVE YOU RIGHT BACK /o stargrind August 14 2008, 05:25:48 UTC
fffff Rune does a better job at it though. 8D Her drawings are just pure epic AWESOME.

IT REALLY IS and I didn't even ship it until this fic orz. But YES I like to think Hibari would have a little fun with this 'cause he's prolly some kind of hedonist, haha, and Yamamoto's Yamamoto enough to just go along with it. I WOULD GLADLY WISH TO BE THERE WHILE IT HAPPENS TOO. /o

Not a problem!! I'm glad you think so that way. Thank you so much for reading. ♥♥♥

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