(I hope this is a-okay to comment on, [no one else has, and that's weird], but if for some reason it isn't lynch me first and tell me to delete this right after. orz)
This was... for lack of a better way to describe it, absolutely magnificent. Wow. (I'm really glad I shirked on my homework to take the time to read it.)
First up, I love your writing style. Everything is always so fluid and witty and fantastic overall. The plot for this was brilliant, the characterization was so spot-on that it made me smile like a maniac--
(Oh, it's definitely okay, haha! ♥♥ It's just that, I haven't pimped it outside my fic journal yet, since I'm waiting on the go-ahead from the challenge coordinator. 8D But I'm pleasantly surprised and happy you took the time to read and comment. So thank you, thank you. ♥)
Haha, oh man, I feel so bad I made you skip out on homework, but at the same time, thank you for taking the time.
This fic was a whole lot of fun to write, despite the headaches it brought and I AM HAPPY it made you smile a lot, 'cause I think I couldn't help myself with making fun of Gokudera here whenever I can. XD
Haha, if it's Algebra, then I'd have to agree with you. D8 That or Calculus ffff.
Yes, he really is! It's kind of sad, considering he's a character that's all serious business, but... it's just ridiculously easy to make fun of him. XD
I can never write the way you do even though I wish I could. Words simply don't flow from my fingers in such a lyrical fashion. This was beautiful, but mostly sad; for mommy!dera and also for seeing Gokudera like this - always reacting, never thinking - and the wheels that are turning unbeknownst to him in the background. Thank you for writing this. It's making my heart all twisty on the inside.
So, did I ever mention how much I love this? Let me count the ways;
situated in Milan, one the largest cities in this godforsaken country, where fashion is everyone's lifeline, the heartbeat that keeps them in motion, breathing, alive. It seems bizarre to him that Shamal would pick such a place to live in, when Venice would have made more sense (where the one-night-stand kind of romance is always an option) and would have catered to his needs better, but it's not a thought he cares a lot about to spend too much time thinking about. Not when he has other things in mind, other things that need answers.
-Giving characterizations to cities always makes me smile, and you pull it off with blinding accuracy.
He swears loudly within the helmet, "Shit!", and then he angrily pulls it off his head, glaring daggers at Shamal's bumper (it's a dangerous inch closer to scratching his Brutale's frame), as if he isn't the one at fault here.-This made me laugh. Gokudera's perpetual RAEG, as if anything out to get him, regardless of whose fault it is
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As for part one, its rough-and-ready attitude, its constant motion, is really appealing. And the last line just sets up for this bit so well aueihfiuhaeh.
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... Ohmygosh. Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh.
... Wow.
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This was... for lack of a better way to describe it, absolutely magnificent. Wow. (I'm really glad I shirked on my homework to take the time to read it.)
First up, I love your writing style. Everything is always so fluid and witty and fantastic overall. The plot for this was brilliant, the characterization was so spot-on that it made me smile like a maniac--
It was just. Really. Really. Great.
Alskajsd great work.
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Haha, oh man, I feel so bad I made you skip out on homework, but at the same time, thank you for taking the time.
This fic was a whole lot of fun to write, despite the headaches it brought and I AM HAPPY it made you smile a lot, 'cause I think I couldn't help myself with making fun of Gokudera here whenever I can. XD
Thank you so much again. ♥♥♥
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Pfft, don't feel bad. Fic reading > doing Algebra. Besides, I have loads of time for Algebra. xD
One of the best aspects of Gokudera's character is how easy it is to laugh at him. He's the unintentional comic relief, haha.
You're very welcome! ♥
(PS: You're Fizzy, right?)
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Haha, if it's Algebra, then I'd have to agree with you. D8 That or Calculus ffff.
Yes, he really is! It's kind of sad, considering he's a character that's all serious business, but... it's just ridiculously easy to make fun of him. XD
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(ps. Yup! That'll be me. 8D Sup, haha.)
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I-I STILL LOVE THIS. ♥!!!!!
You will be posting a link to the art for it when it's done, yes?? 8DDD
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I can never write the way you do even though I wish I could. Words simply don't flow from my fingers in such a lyrical fashion. This was beautiful, but mostly sad; for mommy!dera and also for seeing Gokudera like this - always reacting, never thinking - and the wheels that are turning unbeknownst to him in the background. Thank you for writing this. It's making my heart all twisty on the inside.
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situated in Milan, one the largest cities in this godforsaken country, where fashion is everyone's lifeline, the heartbeat that keeps them in motion, breathing, alive. It seems bizarre to him that Shamal would pick such a place to live in, when Venice would have made more sense (where the one-night-stand kind of romance is always an option) and would have catered to his needs better, but it's not a thought he cares a lot about to spend too much time thinking about. Not when he has other things in mind, other things that need answers.
-Giving characterizations to cities always makes me smile, and you pull it off with blinding accuracy.
He swears loudly within the helmet, "Shit!", and then he angrily pulls it off his head, glaring daggers at Shamal's bumper (it's a dangerous inch closer to scratching his Brutale's frame), as if he isn't the one at fault here.-This made me laugh. Gokudera's perpetual RAEG, as if anything out to get him, regardless of whose fault it is ( ... )
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