Hee~ I still love this. :D :D :D You write Gokudera SO wonderfully, and I also really like how you tackled Hibari on this one as well! Would love to see you continue this, but even if you don't, this stands very well alone.
-whistles- I think I told you before, but let me reiterate: this AU nearly made me cry. xD And really, I think you have captured the hopelessness of their situation here, even though Gokudera is so much himself with the rough edge and that almost-resignation and it's just all around hurtful, because really, there's nothing more than this, is there? And Hibari- unconscious though he might be, he's still very much in-character.
Wow... I really envy people who can write that sort of language 'cuz I can't to save my life... And that was amazingly IC and portrayed the relationship between the two so well, it was spot on. I loved every bit of it.
Man, this is nearly my OTP and hardly anyone writes it. I completely loved this; Gokudera was totally in chracter IMO and I loved when he said: And there's a split-second where he wonders just how pissed off Hibari is right now. It's just like Gokkun to think that ;3
The end made me ;__; a bit but I though it was very fitting. Memmed and I am a huge fan of your writing anyway I think I've read all your KHR stuff?
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It's what they've always been about.
HA! So true. Wording was a bit awkward, but the concept was genius.
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The end made me ;__; a bit but I though it was very fitting. Memmed and I am a huge fan of your writing anyway I think I've read all your KHR stuff?
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