The Case Of The Perfect Stitch-Up: PART TWO - The Missing Heart

[starjenni]

Title: The Case Of The Perfect Stitch-Up: PART TWO - The Missing Heart

Author: starjenni

Disclaimer: Not mine!

Characters, Pairings: Sherlock/John gen. (although could be seen as slash if you lie on the floor, tilt the computer sideways and squint). In this chapter, cameos by Lestrade, Donovan and Anderson.

Warnings: Arguments, swearing, thoughts of

Comments

[bulleteyes]

Well done insights into Sherlock's understanding he is not normal while not understanding what is "normal". People all assume he is at fault since no one could fault John. Excellent descriptions of how John wanting to change Sherlock, hurts Sherlock. You allow him to be as he is written while giving us the insight into the man's inner heart, thought, feelings for he surely does have them

[starjenni]

Oh beautiful review! In fact, your idea that people use and then discard Sherlock - and the idea that he might be so uncaring because of this - was just what I was aiming for, so it's brilliantly astute of you to guess this ahead of schedule :P.
I'm glad you're enjoying my writing! :)

[ourdramaqueen]

Oh, this is heart wrenching - I can understand John and I can understand Sherlock, and I don't want them to part ways but they do need to find a middle ground somehow... already looking forward to the next chapter!

[darthhellokitty]

Oh. I *so* need this to end happily... Fantastic story.

[youkodoll]

Sherlock be honest and try your hardest to get John back! Great second chapter I really like it can't wait for the next update!

[gayalondiel]

Oh, woe and angst, how I love thee.

Really enjoying this. :)