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Seventeen Years (1/2)

Feb 23, 2011 16:11

Title: Seventeen Years (1/2) (the continuation of the series: How Sherlock Learnt To Kiss)

Author: starjenni

Disclaimer: Not mine!

Pairings/Characters: young Mycroft/Sherlock. (Sherlock is 18 - 22).

Warnings: INCEST.

Rating: Because it's incest, I'm giving it the highest one, M. This chapter has frotting, boy-kissing, angst, death, grief. Did I ( Read more... )

sherlock holmes, teaching sherlock, sherlock 2010, mycroft/sherlock, i am going to hell for this one

Comments 14

kuhekabir February 23 2011, 16:38:45 UTC

Loved it :)

skeletree February 23 2011, 19:07:45 UTC

Do you have any idea how much I love you for this series? It's so beautiful and tragic and perfect. And I'm slowly assimilating it into my headcanon...

darthhellokitty February 23 2011, 20:35:09 UTC

Ohhhh, this is lovely and heartbreaking.

the_tire_swing February 23 2011, 21:19:36 UTC

I actually want to cry here, bb.

“taken his shoulders and then kisses him, the softest, saddest kiss he has ever given anyone in his entire life.”
That is so sad.

Your writing brings the depth of the brothers’ lust and love for each other flawlessly. This chapter is perfectly staged; they’ve both fought against it for so long but the death of their father brings it to the fore, unstoppable. It’s not only hot (Sherlock in jeans anyone?) but incredibly intimate and beautiful.

I cannot wait for the next section.

hawkeyegirl61 February 23 2011, 23:05:30 UTC

I have no words to describe how I feel about this. It is absolutely brilliant. You can feel the pain in the writing. I can't wait to see the next part.