The Nature of Things (SanjixZoro, ZoroxSanji) Chapter 13: Part Two

Aug 26, 2017 13:03

Note: We don't own One Piece, obviously. Also, no beta on this one. All mistakes are mine ( Read more... )

sanji/zoro, fanfiction, one piece, zosan, collab

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makai_thief August 26 2017, 22:33:38 UTC
OMG, you´re killing me, seriously! I forgot about Trope, so I was a bit confused first, but only for a moment. But then again, I was waiting for an ugly plot twist, something that would destroy the budding relationship, and bam, a stupid earring. Why did Zoro even keep it?!
Thank you for this smexy second part (hopefully I didn´t miss any 3rd part of the chapter, lol).

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Err...I hope you don´t mind me being a carper, but in this sentence from the beginning of the chapter: Franky had installed safes with locks on them so complicated only himself and Nami could open them. - what is it that "them" is reffering to? The anaphora seems to be missing an antecendent.

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stark_black August 26 2017, 23:33:23 UTC
It's referring to the safes? I'm not sure what you mean.

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makai_thief August 27 2017, 12:03:31 UTC
OTL...of course...I completely skipped the word "safes" - the result of getting hyperexcited about the chapter...Sorry about my off-mark comment:(

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stark_black September 11 2017, 19:37:36 UTC
No! You're fine :) It happens.

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