Your essay isn't bad.. but I've never read "How to Kill a Mockingbird" yet. Bad confession, but, I read others to make up for it.
From what I see, the grammar and spelling is wonderful. A lot better than my essays anyway. But you could make some of the words sound more sophisticated-- it makes the essay seem better even though it's the same thing.
Good struction: you have a thesis statement and you restate it and your body supports your introduction. From what I can tell, the quotes that you put in are great.
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Your essay isn't bad.. but I've never read "How to Kill a Mockingbird" yet. Bad confession, but, I read others to make up for it.
From what I see, the grammar and spelling is wonderful. A lot better than my essays anyway. But you could make some of the words sound more sophisticated-- it makes the essay seem better even though it's the same thing.
Good struction: you have a thesis statement and you restate it and your body supports your introduction. From what I can tell, the quotes that you put in are great.
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