[Speed Fic] Fooling Around

[starlinglove]

Title: Fooling Around
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Characters/Pairings: Gokudera/Ryohei
Word Count: (+/-)1515
Disclaimer: Katekyo Hitman Reborn! is the property of Amano Akira. I, the poor soul that I am, do not own it, yada, yada.
Summary: Think before you drink, it should have been a law. Or at least a cardinal rule of bar venturing. But oh well,

Comments

[xanimeloverx]

I really liked this. The part about the pool was nice, especially with the drinking game added in. ^^ And this is a pairing you don't see a whole lot of, so it was very interesting. The ending was...amusing, to say the least.

[aquarian_days]

I liked that! I wanted to know how the kiss was going to go, but at the same time, it was nice to imagine the rest. Could be Ryohei really is straight and doesn't like it, or that Gokudera doesn't like it, or that they both end up liking it a whole lot! Since it was from Gokudera's perspective, it was interesting how there were things his subconscious kept hinting at but wouldn't tell us about--like who it was that he called in the end, or what other male besides Ryohei Gokudera had become "curious" about. Out of my own curiosity, which one of them were the other men in the bar jealous over when Gokudera put his arm around Ryohei? Gokudera for taking Ryohei, or Ryohei for taking Gokudera?

[starlinglove]

O-Oh, wow. Thank you so much for the long comment! This was my first time writing that pairing and I'm glad to see it didn't come off too badly. It was fun to write Gokudera, though. He's such a cute one.

Hmmm, as for your question. I think it would have to be individual opinion. Some might have been jealous of Gokudera (because he's such a pretty boy, ffft, I can imagine who attracting all kinds of attention), some might have gone for the strong, muscular type that they saw in Ryohei (and his extremeness might have had something to do with it!), and heck some might have just been jealous of the relationship if they weren't currently involved in one.

Thanks again for commenting! /hugs.

[jote_jote]

ahahah i would prefer them dancing or something lol that can be more fun/hot than the drunk.

congratulations :)