Mar 18, 2005 20:33
cool metal against my skin
i know what it feels like
i know what it will do
it will take my pain away
by giving it to me
all my problems will fade
and there will only be me
and the blade
but i don't do what i long to do
lifes too good
its wrong
so i just sit here
all alone
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Just know that.
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i don't want anyone to be worried
i <3 all of you guys
Jo
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Even if you had written it write now... I know that it wouldn't be from feelings right now! Cause you are awesome!!! FREAKING AWESOME! But, as far as feedback on the poem goes... DAMN GIRL. You hit that one right on the head. Love you hun! You are amazing and don't ever forget it.
*hugs and kisses*
♥-Dapper
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