praying for a miracle

Mar 18, 2005 20:33

cool metal against my skin
i know what it feels like
i know what it will do
it will take my pain away
by giving it to me
all my problems will fade
and there will only be me
and the blade
but i don't do what i long to do
lifes too good
its wrong
so i just sit here
all alone

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__theanalogkid March 19 2005, 02:00:20 UTC
Things always get better, no matter how bleak they look.

Just know that.

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starlitsyaoran March 19 2005, 06:45:46 UTC
just so everyone knows i wrote this awhile back, and just decided to post it
i don't want anyone to be worried
i <3 all of you guys
Jo

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I wasn't worried at all!! dapper_dan2004 March 19 2005, 16:45:09 UTC

Even if you had written it write now... I know that it wouldn't be from feelings right now! Cause you are awesome!!! FREAKING AWESOME! But, as far as feedback on the poem goes... DAMN GIRL. You hit that one right on the head. Love you hun! You are amazing and don't ever forget it.
*hugs and kisses*
♥-Dapper

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Re: I wasn't worried at all!! starlitsyaoran March 19 2005, 17:52:27 UTC
you must be the most awesome person in the entire world :p

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