Comments | starlover1990: S/J Fanfic: Always

starlover1990

S/J Fanfic: Always

Nov 16, 2009 20:23

Time: Somewhere after S8
Pairing: Sam/Jack.
Rating: K
Summary: Sam and Jack have their first fight.
Thank you to Twilight for the quick beta!

Always
( Always is Always Carter )

fanfic, always, s/j

Comments 17

sidriel November 16 2009, 20:02:45 UTC

"always, huh" :D
This is great! You got the point how hard it could be fro them to swich from commanding officers to lovers:):):)

"goodnight sir" LOL :D:D:D

starlover1990 November 16 2009, 20:53:32 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you think it's in character...I was so afraid it wasn't!
Glad you like and thank you so much for the review! It has been a LONG time since I wrote a fanfic!

sidriel November 16 2009, 22:00:56 UTC

you should get back to writing :D
btw -love your icon :sweet:

starlover1990 November 16 2009, 22:36:50 UTC

Yeah...I should...there are already some people forcing me to write a longer fanfic...so I think I will become slowly more active on the whole writer thing. :)

Thank you! This is the only place I actually use my icons:P So I love to use cute ones!

karuri November 16 2009, 20:24:56 UTC

Damn right, Sam! You tell him! LOL

I still think him calling her Carter is cute. <3

starlover1990 November 16 2009, 20:54:40 UTC

Rofl! yes she does!

I think Carter is cute too, but I don't think Sam would like it all the time. It would remind her too much of work...(and who wants to be reminded of work while being at home with your boyfriend/husband/whatever)

Thanks so much for the review! :D

karuri November 16 2009, 20:55:59 UTC

mnn..ya, you're right. And welcome :-)

sharp2799 November 16 2009, 20:46:34 UTC

I like this so much for showing how yes, they love each other but yes, adjustments needed to be made.

Btw, is it possible to make the font black? I don't know if it's just my computer but it's a little hard to read the light typeface.

starlover1990 November 16 2009, 20:56:04 UTC

Yup, nothing is easy and definitely not relationships...not even when they are already together! :P

Ah I forgot that. I'll try to fix it later...you probably even gave me an idea to change my layout!:P

not_a_zatarc November 16 2009, 22:02:28 UTC

Aww. So cute.

starlover1990 November 16 2009, 22:37:16 UTC

:D Thank you! Glad you thought it was cute!

rachelgrizott November 16 2009, 22:34:53 UTC

awww cute :)

i usually don't like to read fics but this one is pretty cool :) :)

please send more :P

starlover1990 November 16 2009, 22:38:23 UTC

Thank you! I feel honored that you read my fanfic!

I will try to write some more soon, but it all depends on the muse and the time! :) (and if people are forcing me enough:P )