Err...Chapter 1 I suppose

[starrmoon]

“The strange thing is that you don’t commonly see little girls living on the streets of London around that time. It’s not common now really. We thought there was somethin’ odd ‘bout ‘er.”

“And you had no qualms about taking her in?”

“Well, it was really John. He found her. If he hadn’t taken

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[seaandsand_1973]

awww. how sweet. :)

my fanfic (if that's what you would call it...) generally ended up with roger going "omg yay!" and pete going "shut the f*** up roger!" lol oh but it was funny. xD

[starrmoon]

omg!! I wanna read it!

[seaandsand_1973]

errr...well, it's sort of 68 pages long on word (even with parts missing) and sort of an in-joke with one of my friends. i wrote it to cheer her up one day and it spiralled. a lot. lol

[moonloon]

Aww, Keith. <3 Haha. And I love how excited Roger was and how disgruntled Pete was that he was excited. xD That made me lol.

I also like how you started it out with an interview type thing. Very cool. =]

[starrmoon]

Thank you!

[likewoah_x]

Cute C:
I'm kind of wary about people writing stories with female characters that weren't there in the beginning but you're doing a wonderful job

[starrmoon]

Thank you! ^-^