Brevity

Jan 11, 2010 19:04

Brevity is the bane of my existence. 1

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1 More on why later.

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dancerxo January 12 2010, 03:21:30 UTC
lol. then you definitely cannot survive in singapore or HK where brevity is the way of life. :p

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starry_haze January 14 2010, 06:21:31 UTC
lol! I really wish I could be more concise. I always have to spend a ton of time editing and rewriting and cutting things out. =P *sighs* I guess I'll have to keep working at it... ;)

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dancerxo January 15 2010, 08:16:44 UTC
ok let's try this little exercise on brevity.

you need to order a packet of chicken rice, to go. how would you say it to a singapore or hk food seller in english?

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starry_haze January 15 2010, 18:13:14 UTC
With formalities: "May I order a packet of chicken rice to go?"
Without formalities: "One packet of chicken rice... to go?"
Shorter: "Chicken rice to go?"

(I think I'm hopeless. =P The first thing I thought when I read the question was, "Wait, am I supposed to ask with or without formalities?")

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