old story i started and never finished

[starryredfire]

she watched as he packed up his things one by one. she held back the tears that she promised she wouldn't shed. slowly one by one these tears are free from her eyes and she knows that she never truly meant to keep that one promise to him. he was leaving for a better life. leaving all he loved was a tough choice he had made but he knew it was for

Comments

[minioko]

I like it! Its good! Go Starry! *w00t*

Re: *blushes*

[starryredfire]

thank you! hehe

Re: whoa

[charlietrips]

*Tear* it's a best seller in my book. good stuff.

Intriguing!

[rejectkitty5]

i loved it! hehehe! absolutely mah-va-lous dahling! you must continue it really...! so yea im hooked now you gotta finish it dez! i see that "fine" literature you read is coming in handy huh? jk. ya know i be kidding!