[bsg] distance enough

Apr 15, 2006 00:22

Title: Distance Enough
Spoilers: Very, very vague for up until the end of season 2. Set a year after that.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: PILOTS.
A/N: bantha_fodder prompted me tonight with an Anna Nalick song because I wanted to write Kara/Lee. Two hours and 3000 words later, this is the result and of course it's nothing like her prompt at all! I love school holidays ( Read more... )

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bantha_fodder April 14 2006, 14:31:51 UTC
UGH OMG IT SUX

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stars_like_dust April 14 2006, 14:33:23 UTC
You realise you betaed this, right?

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bantha_fodder April 14 2006, 14:36:35 UTC
OMG SHUT UP.

At least I caught your dumb author's note before anyone else saw it.

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stars_like_dust April 14 2006, 14:40:06 UTC
NO, YOU SHUT UP.

What dumb author's note? I have no idea what you are talking about.

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whatimages April 14 2006, 14:50:18 UTC
omg ajklfjadslsadkfskdgfsafkl

Ahem. I loved the bit where they're planning and talking over each other but they GET IT and it makes sense. And her throwing his gloves at him! Much love for the last line as well.

<33

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stars_like_dust April 14 2006, 14:53:28 UTC
Coherancy is so overrated.

I am glad you like my last line, because as you know I suck at them, and I'm slowly improving the ratio of Claira-by-herself against Claira-with-help-mostly-from-pen.

In conclusion, I LOVE PILOTS. The end.

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run_atreyu April 14 2006, 15:00:38 UTC
PILOTS! I am so glad I re-re-re-refreshed my flist before bed. This was great, like always. I love your school holidays too.

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run_atreyu April 14 2006, 15:01:43 UTC
Oh, and also? Fat Lee is never not going to be funny. I re-read that line so many times because it is always and forever hilarious that Lee ODs on noodles in Kara's absence. WHO WILL THINK OF THE NOODLES?!

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stars_like_dust April 14 2006, 15:15:55 UTC
Fat Lee burns my soul. Seriously. I'm just like "But why? Why, Ron, why? aldkfjalkdjflakdjfaldkfja" about it.

I love how it's clearly pilot related, though. I mean, if he can't have Kara, what's the point?

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run_atreyu April 15 2006, 01:24:23 UTC
Even the phrase "Fat Lee" wants to make me die laughing. I think because of all the hilarious threads centred around it in the days after the finale. Oh god, that shot of him waddling down the Pegasus corridor. Gleeeeeeee ;-)

I, too, love the pilot-relatedness of it all and want to see how/why he re-hots next season.

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cbackson April 14 2006, 15:20:52 UTC
OMG I AM NOT SUPPOSED TO BE ON LJ BECAUSE IT IS GOOD FRIDAY AND NOW I AM THINKING ABOUT PILOTS INSTEAD OF JESUS.
*repents*
*reads again*
*goes to hell*

(The whole bit towards the beginning when she's trying to figure out how to approach him again, and she's so nervous and she's trying not to let it show and--guh. So real. So fricking real.)

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stars_like_dust April 14 2006, 15:50:01 UTC
Dude, I wrote this all on Good Friday and I didn't even make church in the morning because I was so tired after housemate shenanigans, which is the first time in 20 years. (I am 21.)

I shall repent in the morning.

I love Kara so, especially when she's all vulnerable. I am so glad you liked it, honey.

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cbackson April 15 2006, 12:04:34 UTC
Oh, I read about the housemate shenanigans! You sound as if you were much more patient than I would have been. I get very irritated when friends are drunk-stupid.

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dangermousie April 14 2006, 15:28:40 UTC
Wow. Beautiful. Especially that last line.

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stars_like_dust April 14 2006, 15:48:13 UTC
Thank you so much. :)

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