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When He Was Her (And He Looked Different)

Jul 14, 2011 15:56

Title: When He Was Her (And He Looked Different)
Rating: R
Beta: Aquanova; the main reason my work makes sense.
Pairing(s): Arthur/Eames
Word Count: 10,019
Warnings: Swearing and violent themes. (Much like the movie, only with more obscenities. Hence 'R' rating.)
Summary: Bodyswap; when the consciousness is exchanged between two bodies.
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fanfictionplease, fandom:ohheyinception, because love counts:arthur/eames

Comments 27

_profiterole_ July 14 2011, 12:15:46 UTC

That was wonderful! ♥ And the fact that the bodyswap was between Arthur and Ariadne and not between Arthur and Eames was very original and led to a lot of wonderful realisations and emotions. <3

starsdontsleep July 14 2011, 12:40:21 UTC

Thanks! I liked using the two of them for that reason! It gave me a different set of hurdles to tackle and opened the door for some great misunderstandings :)

immoral_crow July 14 2011, 14:47:18 UTC

Oh amazing! I thought Eames was going to guess, so where you went with it was lovely and surprising. Really well done!

starsdontsleep July 15 2011, 02:02:16 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked my take on it :)

mirareeves July 14 2011, 14:49:23 UTC

Oh man, this is so good. Arthur and Ariadne are so uncomfortable and awkward, and I just cringed my way through the first half of this. And Eames, oh poor Eames. He wants so much and even when he has Arthur, he doesn't even believe it. Aww.

starsdontsleep July 15 2011, 02:04:14 UTC

Yay! I'm glad my work can inspire those emotions in readers. It's the best part, knowing it has. So thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

iwtfcp July 14 2011, 16:47:46 UTC

This is so good. The characterizations were spot-on - this is EXACTLY how it would go down if this happened. Love this so much! Thank you :D

starsdontsleep July 15 2011, 02:10:01 UTC

Thank you! That means a lot as I spent many a night keeping my beta awake worrying over whether I'd written them correctly or not. Hah. (First times and all that) So thank you for the comment! ♥

twisted_ream July 14 2011, 21:41:28 UTC

I enjoyed this so much, I enjoyed this wonderful, amazing fic with wonderful way of words and writing and story arc! and I love Eames in this oh
So good I'm a bit shaking and I think this was fast on my short top-list-of-fics.

starsdontsleep July 15 2011, 02:13:12 UTC

Wow. Wow, really? I'm not quite sure what to say other then: thank you so much! I'm so glad my fic could find it's way onto your favourites and since it's my first one I'm even more grateful! So thank you again for all your kind words and this lovely comment. ♥