Comments | starsheild: To Love A Stranger (15/17)

starsheild

To Love A Stranger (15/17)

Apr 28, 2011 08:52

"Who are you?"

Prowl paused, then slowly he set aside the data pad he had been reading and turned to face Jazz squarely. He had been expecting this question ever since the medic had allowed him into Jazz’s room. "I am Prowl."

"Which I've figured out means exactly nuthin'." Jazz snapped, frustration and anger coloring his voice. He had thought ( Read more... )

jazz, tlas, prowl, fanfic, challenge entry, pg, 2011, multi chapter

Comments 36

gatekat April 28 2011, 13:10:34 UTC

Damn. Just ... damn.
The fireworks should be interesting when Jazz's processors catch up.
I bet Prowl will be surprised when it's not directed at him (much?).

starsheild April 28 2011, 14:57:00 UTC

There is going to be a great deal of anger, but not at Prowl.

prowlsgirl April 28 2011, 13:16:06 UTC

Poor Prowl I hope Jazz will still like him and love him.

starsheild April 28 2011, 14:58:08 UTC

Oh, he's not ready to give up yet. He just needs a new angle of attack.

bluetaelon April 28 2011, 13:43:56 UTC

Poor Prowl, thinks he just lost it all:(

starsheild April 28 2011, 14:58:34 UTC

Indeed he does. And based on past experience he would be right.

bluetaelon April 28 2011, 15:27:04 UTC

Good thing Jazz isn't like most mechs:)

anavidbookworm April 28 2011, 13:45:15 UTC

Jazz, stop him! Oh my, you just evil for leaving it there. Prowl finally reveals the truth and then runs away before Jazz has time to process it. And there are only two chapters left!

If you haven't guessed, I'm freaking out right now. I'll be better soon but can't wait to see what happens. :)

starsheild April 28 2011, 15:04:58 UTC

Prowl apparently isn't very good at handling personal matters head on. Give him a battle and he is in his element. Give him a relationship and he is a rabbit.

Two chapters left- one tomorrow and Saturdays might not be up until evening since I work mornings on Sat.

d_lueth April 28 2011, 14:51:47 UTC

When Jazz said nothing Prowl stood and headed for the door. He paused for a moment in the doorway without looking back as he added. "I am sorry, my lord, that I am not what you were looking for."

Oooh, that sounds like a challenge Jazz! *gets Team Jazz pompoms* >.< Gotta show Prowl you like him for more than his heritage, and now Jazz knows that his bonded has the experience and training needed to keep his city from imploding into chaos. :3 Much better than your average run of the mill Noble.

starsheild April 28 2011, 15:07:23 UTC

True. Prowl might not know noble politics but Jazz definantly has the chance to come out ahead.