To Love A Stranger (17/17)

[starsheild]

Jazz walked up behind his bondmate, wrapped his arms carefully around the larger mech and held him close. He could feel the pain that others could not see.

Prowl would be the first to admit that Praxus had never really been home for him. But it had been a hope after Polyhex had fallen to the rebels, a place that had not been tainted by the war.

Comments

[gatekat]

Aww. Well, that does explain now pt 16 could be finished at pt 17. I really hope you decide to go back and fill in a lot of that time, at least up until the bond is real as well as legal. I'd love to watch Prowl make a place for himself and Jazz's creators realize they actually got a good deal, even if it wasn't what they wanted. I could easily see Prowl making a major difference in holding Polyhex for as longer than expected.

If this is anything like fandon Blue, he'll latch onto Prowl and never let go.

[bluetaelon]

You said it better then I could, so ditto what gatekat said:) Other then that I have loved this fic and its been my fav this month to read:)

[gatekat]

So ... should I start torturing folks with what my Blue immediately started to yap about?
*looks warily at the normally docile muse*

[starsheild]

I want to scream yes and cry no at the same time because apparently your muses feed my plot bunnies when I am not looking...

[thepheonixqueen]

I agree with Gatekat, I'd love to see the parts in between. but I have to say, I loved your work and it was wonderful how well you wrote it out! Great job!

[starsheild]

Thank you. Not sure if there will be anything muli-chapter, but there are a couple of side stories I'm working on.

[evvj]

I've been reading this from the beginning, but I don't think I've commented on it yet. I have to say, though, that I really like how you wrapped this all up with this link back to the very first chapter and such open-ended hope for the future. Very nicely done.

[starsheild]

Thank you. I like writing complete circles,when I can. It makes my brain happy.

[renegadewriter8]

!NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! SEQUUUUUUUUELLLLLLLLL!! PLEEEEEEEEASE! Must see Jazz kicking Streetwise's aft! And more fluff! XD PLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEE!!

*crashes*

[gatekat]

You know, if Streetwise survives (as in canon), he'll fume forever about Prowl becoming the Autobot SIC.

[starsheild]

Now has a massive number of plot bunnies along that line... and some serious potential sparkbreak on Blue's part.

[gatekat]

*grins and sneaks food in for the bunnies*
Not so happy about Blue sparkbreak, but he'll always have Prowl, Jazz, (Twins? Hopeful) and just about everyone else. It's hard not to like the guy.

[anavidbookworm]

At first, I was uncertain about the large jump forward in time but after finishing this chapter I think it was the perfect completion to this piece. I really do hope you write more in this verse; this story was way too enjoyable to not have more.

[starsheild]

Side story in the works. Should be up sometime next week, provided my muses keep cooperating.

[gatekat]

*Happy dances*