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starsheild

(Fic) Forced Hand (2/2)

Jun 03, 2011 22:14

Title: Forced Hand (2/2)
Verse: G1 AU
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Angst, fluff, intimacy, and a very possessive Jazz
Characters/pairing: Prowl/Jazz

This is part of To Love a Stranger. Timeline is somewhere just before Someone Once Who Cared. Not sure I am entirely satisfied with this so there may be a re-write somewhere down the road. Please shred ( Read more... )

jazz, pg13, multi chapter, 2011, tlas, prowl, fanfic

Comments 13

gatekat June 4 2011, 02:43:59 UTC

They are so sweet together. It'd be so weird for Prowl when he'd promoted over Jazz, I expect.

starsheild June 4 2011, 03:00:06 UTC

I never thought of that. Odd for Prowl, certainly, but a definite moment of pride for Jazz that someone else finally see's Prowls worth.

gatekat June 4 2011, 03:02:35 UTC

Oh, most definitely. Jazz will be all sorts of thrilled on many levels. Not just the promotion, but for Prowl to have grown into authority enough to be SIC, and how skilled he is at tactical.

Blue will be very hyper-happy too.
Streetwise will snarl.

starsheild June 4 2011, 11:39:27 UTC

Bluestreak will be ricocheting around like one of those super bouncy balls on steroids.
I think Streetwise will be disgusted at that point more than anything else. He really is turning into somewhat of a selfish, self-serving individual.

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... kai_chan94 June 4 2011, 04:50:27 UTC

Prowl and Jazz are so cute together. Your story is amazing and you make me seriously wonder if anything happened when these two bonded. Jazz probably got a good look at what made Prowl so insecure and went ballistic.

Re: ... starsheild June 4 2011, 11:56:36 UTC

Thank you!

As a general rule Jazz tries to keep his more violent knee jerk reactions in check to avoid upsetting Prowl. Though I think once Jazz finds out the root of Prowl's problems someone is going to pay dearly...

renegadewriter8 June 4 2011, 15:07:06 UTC

awwwwwwwwww I loved this! Great job1!Poor Prowl, being scared he had messed up for crashing. But Jazz always knows what to do when Prowl is feeling down XP

starsheild June 4 2011, 23:56:10 UTC

Of course. For Jazz is stubborn and he isn't about to give Prowl up now.

anavidbookworm June 4 2011, 23:36:38 UTC

That was beautiful. You made tear up with all of Prowl's thoughts of being alone again. It's a good thing that Jazz will never let him go.

starsheild June 4 2011, 23:58:23 UTC

Thank you.

femme4jack June 9 2011, 06:18:47 UTC

This is brilliant, sweet, and super sexy, and now I have to gobble up all the parts that I missed. Sometimes writers block is wonderful because it means I have more time to read XDDD