Writing Challenges

[starshipcat]

There's a new vignette challenge at Sarah Hoyt's blog. My effort is from the Grissom timeline, as Elaine Woods reflects upon her childhood

marycatelli has a new vignette challenge over at her Dreamwidth blog. My effort looks superficially mundane, but I think it's actually from the Chaffee Artilect 'verse, given the reference to virtual reality gamingThere's

Comments

[asher63]

I really like the use of foreshadowing in your piece. From the get-go, you know it's going to end badly for somebody, but the exact fate of the over-confident Billy is saved for the end.

[starshipcat]

Thanks.

As soon as I started writing, I knew that things would end badly. I just didn't know how badly, or to whom.